Winter (Haiku) Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

Winter (Haiku)

Rating: 4.8


A Shadow of hard stone
shivers in the soft water
Icy winter night.

A gentle door knock
Is it winter 's cool breeze
or a spring as a guest.

Womanly winter
fails to cool off
smouldering passion

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepti Agarwal 04 December 2008

good personification of winter here.. :)

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Vinod Kumar 25 December 2008

A winter snowfall....in my mind in the spring, Well done dear Dr.

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Kesav Easwaran 24 February 2009

good imageries...nice haiku combo, Hitesh...10

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Catrina Heart 29 March 2009

a nice winter poem, a deep provoking verses entwined....10

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Reshma Ramesh 30 November 2008

superb...............well done! !

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a wonderful poem with vivid images..10++++ Womanly winter fails to cool off smouldering passion

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Womanly winter fails to cool off smouldering passion how much your thinking power goes!

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Sandra Fowler 27 April 2009

Beautiful write, Dr. Sheth. Snowflakes are always falling in my soul. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 April 2009

I loved this poem.If you're not too busy could you read 'Reflection'

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