Dr Hitesh Sheth

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Why Me? - Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

When the hopes are hassled
And relationships are rattled
Naïveté asks, why me?
When wishes are whacked
And dreams are dashed
Naïveté asks, why me?
When fantasies are fettered
And blessings are battered
Naïveté asks, why me?
When desires are demolished
And ambitions are admonished
Naïveté asks, why me?
When temptations are traumatized
And passions are pulverized
Naïveté asks, why me?


Naïveté with influence
And naïveté with affluence
Never asks, why me?
Naïveté with name
And naïveté with fame
Never asks, why me?
Naïveté with health
And naïveté with wealth
Never asks, why me?
Naïveté with fiefdom
And naïveté with wisdom
Never asks, why me?
Naïveté with beauty
And naïveté with booty
Never asks, why me?

Comments about Why Me? by Dr Hitesh Sheth

  • Chinedu Dike (4/26/2015 1:43:00 PM)

    A unique piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. A lovely poem with deep meaning. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Renu Kakkar (1/24/2012 1:54:00 AM)

    we never say why me when we achieve something or life gives us all....it becomes why me when there is tragedy or thing do not go as we plan...good peem (Report) Reply

  • (7/18/2010 7:55:00 PM)

    Your poem is musical and full of wisdom.
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  • Zaynab Elzain (7/16/2010 2:03:00 AM)

    i like this poem..it's acc the best thing for me right now..just reading it make me feel better thnx for this lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Dulakshi Wakista (2/21/2010 10:55:00 AM)

    Well expressed.I really loved rhymes that you've used through out this poem.Great work.Very interesting poem.Tanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2009 9:54:00 AM)

    i like....but i dnt ask god why me? i ask my self why me? what did i do now? +10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/23/2009 7:04:00 AM)

    a person usually never thank God when they are happy, nor do they ask why me, when they get what they want, but only in times of crisis they think of God and sometimes curse God, and ask WHY ME? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? (Report) Reply

  • (11/14/2009 7:31:00 PM)

    truthful thoughts expressed in a unique presentation...congrats (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2009 1:09:00 AM)

    Sir.. your poem is indeed one of the best I've come across in poemhunter. it exudes grace, innocence very well. (Report) Reply

  • (11/3/2009 8:12:00 AM)

    perfectly versed. fresh ideas.10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/2/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    One usually asks this question, 'Why me? ' when one's life full of troubles. (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2009 12:41:00 PM)

    You’ve jockeyed well the emotion horses as jackpot.
    I should read it at least 10 times.
    Ten++ for Wisdom
    Ms. Nivedita

    Please visit my page and comment on my poems Sir
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  • (9/20/2009 2:13:00 AM)

    What a wonderful poem this is. I just realized how fortunate i have been all my life, that whatever troubles i have, they are minimal compare to the blessings i have............Thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (8/13/2009 2:34:00 PM)

    This poem is right were it should be in the top 500 (Report) Reply

  • (8/4/2009 12:33:00 PM)

    Nothing can add. Creative! Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (8/4/2009 4:55:00 AM)

    So the second stanza teaches how to be significant and outstanding and of top 500...well versed...and ofcourse one of top 500 (Report) Reply

  • (7/29/2009 8:10:00 AM)

    it balances out doctor...
    people with influence and affluance, people with health and wealth.... do ask... why me? just scratch the surface... and try to see from near.... everywhere you shall unearth grave insecurities and fear......
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  • (7/10/2009 2:35:00 PM)

    this is wha i said that this poem truly i read before..as the beautiful things stay always in the mind..it's songs ring in our ears all the time..i know this poem very well..sweet and it's beauty increase each time..now let me check what i wrote in my previous comment... (Report) Reply

  • (7/7/2009 7:53:00 PM)

    an excelent unique so meaningful sweet poem..loved it..............many tens for it (Report) Reply

  • (5/29/2009 5:09:00 PM)

    The ryhme is great Dr. and the rythm of the poem is lovely.....and the title is perfect.Actually, it deserves to be from the Top 500 poems! ! ! .........thank you
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 9, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 29, 2011

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