Fountain Of Fearless Fiancé Comments

thats very beautiful

The flow of words were soft and beautifully penned out, great imagery used. a10/10

Interesting title and use of metaphors and good descriptive words and images.

Good sybolism, imagery

written symbolically and poetically.

Reminds me of something from TOLKINS works on the same tone

interesting point of view, a bit dark, but nice ending....good as always

I am afraid that this is too obscure for me to translate into something that speaks to me in a language I can understand. GW62