Free From Worldly Hassles Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Free From Worldly Hassles

Rating: 5.0


At the foothills of a valley
Where the sun is ready to set
And the water body is surrounded
By the dense forest
Where the birds call from the mighty oaks
And the heart comes out of the mouth
To swim in the pristine beauty of the lake
The place so tranquil
Where music appears
From the rustling leaves
The gushing water
The chirping of crickets
And between this amazing environment
I saw an abandoned boat
Right in the middle of the lake
Surrounded by the lotus
Floating carefree
Free from worldly hassles
Four eyes talking to each other

Free From Worldly Hassles
Thursday, August 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature love,nature walks
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gino Valentine 06 August 2020

Once your search foe such place is over do inform me I will join those two lovers there with my dame to kick my ownself.

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Mj Lemon 06 August 2020

What you describe...perfection, freedom! This verse goes to myfavourites.

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Juhaina Tumlu 06 August 2020

Straight to my favourite list of poems..... I saw an abandoned boat Right in the middle of the lake Surrounded by the lotus Floating carefree Free from worldly hassles Four eyes talking to each other

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Shreya Hacks 06 August 2020

Great imagery and fine flow in your poem...10/10

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S H 06 August 2020

You took me on a journey with this poem. The beauty of words and phrases can never be undermined. Top 10.

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Michael Jack 09 January 2021

Excellent poem with great picture.

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Deepak S S 20 October 2020

Marvellous poem 5*

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2020

Muse of the sun! ! ! ! With the romance of nature; Sunshine love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nosheen Irfan 09 August 2020

Just amazing. You are at your best here. So good to read such sterling poetry on a nice lazy Sunday. I wish I could give more than 10.

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Darren Jkoeryo 07 August 2020

Fantastic flow once again my applause Right in the middle of the lake Surrounded by the lotus Floating carefree Free from worldly hassles Four eyes talking to each other

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