When sunsets for night sorrow drifts in, whispering through the trees.
Her gown flutters through the air as she glides over me.
Setting quietness throughout the land,
In a dangerious whisper that gave me shivers.
The despair settled over me, as her calming deadly wrath,
Wrapped me in a blanket of sadness.
Nicely rendered poem on night's hypnotism affecting all in the world!
The poem, though small, leaves a big impact. How the night overtakes the entire atmosphere in its grip and casts its spell, is just nerve tingling. Thanks.
This poem definitely resonates with a lot of people, including myself. Good job at putting words to the feelings!
Wonderfully penned touching poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent poem, You have intense imagery and emotion. Very well done. Take care.