Leslie Alexis

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Freestyle (Jesus Vs. Satan)

Poem by Leslie Alexis

Satan first.

Man you're all that and more,
You love the rich, the sick, and the poor.
Truth! I envy you!
You made the sky that's blue, the birds that flew: man every word you utter comes true.
You made man, as for me I made man fall in love with man.
Can't you see I interrupted your perfect plan?
You love everything that's good and just.
as for me, I'm into premature sex and lust, I let mine satisfy their every little thirst.

I ain't got much, except a few I stole from you.
Those fools, they don't realize I have them just to get back at you.
Yes, they live a life full of fun.
They don't realize at death, all this fun will dun;
And with me in the fiery piths of hell, they'll Burn.

Jesus now

Satan you're so lame,
All the words you uttered just brought me more fame.
Can't you see, life's no game?
Haven't you any shame?
Even your twisted mind can't spoil my name.
The truth of me will always be the same.
Satan from the start you were filled with greed.
If you were a man, you wouldn't even deserve the air you breathe.

Oh, before I forget, I'm fed up of these lies: you ain't got nutting!
Hell is meant for you and your crew alone to be suffering.
All you had is now dead,
Or haven't you read?
Where there's life, there's hope,
Thinking of it: it's hard for you to cope!
All that need to be done, is for them to repent:
Remember it's for this cause I was sent!

times up (hehe)

Copyright © 2009 Leslie Alexis

Comments about Freestyle (Jesus Vs. Satan) by Leslie Alexis

  • Kim BarneyKim Barney (12/5/2014 7:40:00 AM)

    Love it.
    Well written and pretty much matches my beliefs.(Report)Reply

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  • Melanie Johnson (1/8/2010 10:22:00 AM)

    This is great! I love the idea. You're an inspiration to many... Keep up the good work. =)(Report)Reply

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  • Eyan Desir (2/23/2009 12:30:00 PM)

    very good excellent, work man.....
    keep writting(Report)Reply

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  • Susan Bagley (2/8/2009 6:16:00 PM)

    I love it! It made me smile! It is all so simply true! Can't argue with truth.

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  • Stephanie Saba (12/29/2008 12:17:00 PM)

    Praise the Lord! !
    This is an amaznig poem. well done.: ]
    God Bless.(Report)Reply

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (12/21/2008 3:19:00 PM)

    this one is on the money-honey(Report)Reply

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  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (12/3/2008 8:11:00 AM)

    The fight between God and devil
    or between truth and evil
    doenst matter who wins
    sufferer are human beings.
    good write(Report)Reply

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  • Sarah Burton (9/7/2008 10:43:00 PM)

    Your style of writing is not exactly my taste, maybe its because im english and only 17, but still i like this peice, it has meaning, and makes you think..(Report)Reply

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (8/12/2008 11:46:00 PM)

    well written narrative verses...well done...

    Ency Bearis(Report)Reply

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  • Saint CynosureSaint Cynosure (8/12/2008 5:38:00 PM)

    This a good poem and a good idea for a poem.
    Although I have just started reading your words,
    this is my favorite so far.
    GOD bless, Saint.(Report)Reply

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  • Isabel Lavender (8/12/2008 4:23:00 PM)

    This poem is a master piece OMG.

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  • Wanelisa Albert (8/10/2008 2:29:00 PM)

    i love the creativity of this poem....
    but my ears hurt as it rings with truth.
    Jesus is all that and so much more!
    thank you for amazing potrayal of my Father
    see my poem...oops i swore in gods presence!(Report)Reply

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  • Prat Havan (4/27/2008 11:28:00 PM)

    that was a splendid poem
    i just loved it(Report)Reply

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  • Michelle Versfeld (2/19/2008 10:53:00 AM)

    Well... I don't know what to say. it's awsome. I love it.
    Thanx for a great poem(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, April 30, 2010