- Freshly Fallen Snow/Frisch Gefallener Schnee (Haiku) Poem by Ben Gieske

- Freshly Fallen Snow/Frisch Gefallener Schnee (Haiku)

Rating: 2.9


freshly fallen snow
no tracks to follow
no dreams

frisch gefallener Schnee
keine Spuren zum Nachgehen
keine Träume


Published online by Chrysanthemum in October,2009.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

wonderful haiku.. very much so.

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Catrina Heart 25 November 2009

fabulous haiku shared! ! !

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I get all white with these images Ben, so I can relate well to the message of this haiku. Just white all around me, yet a beauty of its own. Beautiful.....10 Karin

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Brian Jani 13 May 2014

Well written Ben keep it up

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Dawn Fuzan 13 May 2014

Ben I enjoyed reading this one keep it up

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Ritty Patnaik 14 December 2009

dear ben....how very true! your feelings are as beautiful as the words here.great write. ritty

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Meggie Gultiano 01 December 2009

this is beautiful, Ben..I love it

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george george 30 November 2009

Terrific image and message to this haiku! Sehr gut, auch auf Deutsch! Wunderbar!

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