- Freshly Fallen Snow/Frisch Gefallener Schnee (Haiku) Poem by Ben Gieske

- Freshly Fallen Snow/Frisch Gefallener Schnee (Haiku)

Rating: 2.9


freshly fallen snow
no tracks to follow
no dreams

frisch gefallener Schnee
keine Spuren zum Nachgehen
keine Träume


Published online by Chrysanthemum in October,2009.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I get all white with these images Ben, so I can relate well to the message of this haiku. Just white all around me, yet a beauty of its own. Beautiful.....10 Karin

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Catrina Heart 25 November 2009

fabulous haiku shared! ! !

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wonderful haiku.. very much so.

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Brian Jani 13 May 2014

Well written Ben keep it up

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Dawn Fuzan 13 May 2014

Ben I enjoyed reading this one keep it up

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Ritty Patnaik 14 December 2009

dear ben....how very true! your feelings are as beautiful as the words here.great write. ritty

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Meggie Gultiano 01 December 2009

this is beautiful, Ben..I love it

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george george 30 November 2009

Terrific image and message to this haiku! Sehr gut, auch auf Deutsch! Wunderbar!

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