Friendship - a seamless sky
Far too complex to gauge or delve.
At times like the early rays of morn
It fills one with joy.
At times like a gentle breeze
It cuddles and cossets.
At times like dark clouds
It overcasts the mind.
At times it comes blowing like a gale
Sweeping us off our feet.
At times it sprouts like a seedling
Growing out into a tree, giving shade.
It blossoms like a Night Queen
Diffusing in the air, a heady scent.
At times like the plaintive notes from a flute
It saddens the soul.
Like a rainbow it may swiftly vanish
Or remain like a beacon
Guiding us when storms rage.
In darkness, it burns like a candle.
In loneliness, a sweet presence.
At times so silent
At times so very eloquent
Finally like an unfinished tale
A fond memory
A lingering scent
Like the life - sustaining breath
It remains…..!
The beauty of friendship and the joy in hanging around with friends is so lovely presented in this read of yours dear Mam. Now on reading this muse of yrs everyone wanted to know where they actually fit in the list.
where do i fit into all of this, my fiend.......i mean friend? ? bri :)
Kipling says one man in a thousand will stick closer than a brother and it's worthwhile seeking him all your life if you find him before the other Valsa says in darkness it burns like a candle Two wise poets! -10+10
The lovely poem is a preface of a book on friendship......................10
About friendship you have delineated a beautiful and meaningful poem. At times like the early rays of morn friendship fills one with joy. At times like a gentle breeze it cuddles and cossets. In darkness, it burns like a candle. In loneliness, a sweet presence. Thanks for sharing.
A worthwhile read again. You sure are, at least ostensibly, someone who delves into nature, for in almost all the poems I have read, you attribute some aspect of it to nature: that has become a defining feature of your poetry. The part starring the rainbow and a beacon is my favourite.
Friendship, it is great on your part to create a poem on friendship without losing even a bit of it's eloquence, beauty and greatness. Friendship means all positives put together. It is of course fond memory and a lingering scent. Thank you Valsa George.
Friendship is like a candle that shows light is darkness. Friendship carries deep love and affection. Re-visiting such a lovely poem we feel glad. This has deep value within...10
In darkness, it burns like a candle. In loneliness, a sweet presence. At times so silent At times so very eloquent Finally like an unfinished tale A fond memory A lingering scent Like the life - sustaining breath It remains…..! .. .. nice theme. It is a beautiful poem on friendship with eloquent depiction. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It cuddles and cossets! ! Nice piece of work.