(g) 2 (Biographical) I Am Water Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(g) 2 (Biographical) I Am Water

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I am water
Sometimes solid...you can always depend on
Sometimes liquid...fits in anywhere
Sometimes vapor...ephemeral...I am there and then I am gone
Sometimes ice...but can be dissolved by fire
Sometimes swirling....with passion
Sometimes tranquil....with still desire
Always flowing....unaware of the destination
Sometimes vivid....like blue sapphire
Always pure....see your reflection
Always rising...wanting to go higher

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 26 September 2006

T.O. with such a rite like this.....what else is there to say exept... lets dive in to the works of T.O. well versed.............

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***** ********* 26 September 2006

Wonderful poem and ethos and what we all should try and aspire too. free flowing in everything we do. Smiling at you, thanking you for your beautiful work, Tai

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Prasanna Kumari 26 September 2006

you have some wonderful imagination here.nice poem

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 September 2006

WELL, REALLY NOW, WHEN YA' THINK ABOUT IT, WHAT THE 'ELL ELSE WOULD TRANQUIL OCEAN BE? ! LOVE IT T.O.....A FINE PENNING INDEED, YOUNG MERMAID! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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David Darbyshire 26 September 2006

Sometimes falling, sometimes white, nice read dave xxx

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