~ Game Of Songs ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Game Of Songs ~

Rating: 4.6


GAME OF SONGS
Ms. Nivedita
UK
[To Poet John Knight ~ Christmas poetic nosegays]
December 15,2009.

Standing you’re
On the opposite bank
Of my song,
Ambulant my tunes become
Me, don’t get you.

Breeze is blowing
Oh, oh excellently
Keep anchored the boat
No more.
Cross and come, O Dear
Into the abode of my bosom.

Game of songs with you
Game of distance is,
Me in agony play flute
All the time,
When, O Dear yourself will come
Take my flute to play,
In the dense darkness of
Rapture-full silent night.

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Adapted from RNT [Ref. to ‘Bliss’ for further info]

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dwi Utami 10 July 2010

hey girl what do you think abou game and songs? But your poem is good.gud luck,

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 03 July 2010

words help you picture your feelings more than its life size.10. shan

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 June 2010

I've read this a second time... I have played this game.

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Louis Rams 17 June 2010

it matters not the distance apart, only what comes out of your heart. so let him play the joys of that flute, as long as it brings him closer to you.

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Game of songs with you Game of distance is, These are the games we play, games of life and games of love. And games of distant yearning.

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Nithin Purple 12 January 2013

well written and nice

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Fayeda Vanimel 13 August 2011

standing opposite side by diving in to your song, , ........

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Louis Cecile 29 November 2010

I enjoyed the rhythm of this poem. The way it sways till the silent ending. Very interesting take on the subject. great work

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Kevin Carney 04 October 2010

Great poem, about lovers on opposites sides or far away. You really express love in a interesting way. Isn't love really a game of songs? Beatifully written and quite beautiful in the words you write.

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Rinki Nandy 16 July 2010

In the dense darkness of Rapture-full silent night... i want to play such a game too if it is the result...an appeal to break the monotony n perish the longing....indeed a captivating write with words generating the ambience...for deep rooted feelings...more like a painting it is...with bold colors of dreaming a dream n concluding with the urgency to face n rejoice in the beyond.10++++ thanks sharing...

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