saadat tahir

Gold Star - 5,205 Points (21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

Girls … 2408-2k12 - Poem by saadat tahir

Girls
Lovely, pretty
Chilling, wanting, hiding,
Counters, movies, streets, and meets
Lurking, winking, pouncing
Fairy? scary?
Sexy



Original
24 Aug,2012
Islamabad


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A Diamante Poem:
A diamante poem is a poem written in the shape of a diamond. Centre justified.
Each line uses specific types of words, like adjectives and -ing words.
It may, but does not have to rhyme

Comments about Girls … 2408-2k12 by saadat tahir

  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/9/2012 1:04:00 PM)


    They do not know we call them in so many adjectives.Depicted well Sir (Report) Reply

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  • Poetheart Morgan (9/3/2012 11:49:00 PM)


    Remarkable! ! ! I did know that! ! ! Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (8/31/2012 4:21:00 AM)


    Young girls flirting? Nice piece. (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (8/30/2012 7:45:00 PM)


    Playful write, makes me want to dance, short yet a joy to watch, thank you for share,10 (Report) Reply

  • The Reader (8/30/2012 2:40:00 AM)


    Ref:
    Urdu book of criticism
    Title: Muqaddama - Shair-o-Shairi Per
    by Hali

    As against the intuitively revealed poems descended on the heart of the poets, the poems deliberately composed on a specific pattern are equally & aesthetically important and they have their status not less than the revealed one...
    you have shared a creative effort...simple n light...!
    you have given the diamond cut typing on the other site...try it here too...thx.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 24, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 24, 2012


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