Hither night falls, but
brings no dreams
sunshine advances, but
kindles no one
flowers bloom, but
winds do not chant.
(Translated by Aiman Rathore)
Shattering words, but the glass house remains intact. Beautiful piece.
There is beauty in your words Naseer.
May you create more of this magical work,
crystal beauty write..simple with meaning..
Hey this is very nice Naseer sir.I mean I am kinda used to read your, thought provoking peices, yet this one is very different and nice.. good for the mind..
cheers// best wishes
Message from Stephanie Cooper:
From: Stephanie Cooper (Richland Center United States; Female; 15)
To: Naseer Ahmed Nasir
Date Time: 4/14/2009 11: 26: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
Hey I read your poem 'Glass House' I really enjoyed it It is somewhat sad though especially the part
'night falls, but brings no dreams'
Its a simple, but amazing
Good job and thanks for sharing!
This so sad. Today lets live the day over and make what we want of it :) Well penned and creative. Thank you for sharing :)
Rain is falling, but dried desert around...that I felt reading this magical poem.
Good one Naseer Sahb
Credit goest to Aimen too
Thanks for sharing
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