Glass House Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

Glass House

Rating: 4.9

Hither night falls, but
brings no dreams
sunshine advances, but
kindles no one
flowers bloom, but
winds do not chant.

(Translated by Aiman Rathore)

Sandra Fowler 05 December 2008

Shattering words, but the glass house remains intact. Beautiful piece. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sid John Gardner. 15 December 2008

There is beauty in your words Naseer. May you create more of this magical work, Sid.

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Ency Bearis 17 December 2008

crystal beauty write..simple with meaning.. Ency Bearis

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Shashendra Amalshan 06 September 2009

Hey this is very nice Naseer sir.I mean I am kinda used to read your, thought provoking peices, yet this one is very different and nice.. good for the mind.. cheers// best wishes shan

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 April 2009

Message from Stephanie Cooper: From: Stephanie Cooper (Richland Center United States; Female; 15) To: Naseer Ahmed Nasir Date Time: 4/14/2009 11: 26: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Hey I read your poem 'Glass House' I really enjoyed it It is somewhat sad though especially the part 'night falls, but brings no dreams' Its a simple, but amazing Good job and thanks for sharing!

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Duh Huh 23 March 2009

This so sad. Today lets live the day over and make what we want of it :) Well penned and creative. Thank you for sharing :)

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Yelena M. 18 March 2009

Rain is falling, but dried desert around...that I felt reading this magical poem.

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ata khan 01 March 2009

Good one Naseer Sahb Credit goest to Aimen too Thanks for sharing

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