Go On Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

Go On

Rating: 4.9


as a single soul
with just a pair of ears
i could hear his song
i could hear him say
'go on'
'this is my world-
you need'nt fear'
and that is when i decided-to
GO ON

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 02 January 2009

Simply beautiful...thank you

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Linda Moore 01 January 2009

Very wonderful, our mission no matter what, is to go on and forward....I Love it...10

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Moushumi moushumi 31 December 2008

Thats the spirit, please go on. And let go of all those which are not music. Happy new year.

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Kesav Easwaran 31 December 2008

God on...i mean on your ears...good going here SLN...a good crispy piece...10

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Indira Babbellapati 30 December 2008

when the word is from HIM, GO ON...

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Naidz Ladia 17 March 2009

written in short lines but hundreds of meanings.. naizz

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Vernon Eaker 21 January 2009

Follow your conscience... go on wonderfully written this is a solid 8 very nicely done

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Chitra - 20 January 2009

the Higher voice that resides within...no matter just follow it..go on! ! way to go! !

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Greenwolfe 1962 10 January 2009

Simple and direct, yet complete. Very good structure as well . GW62

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Luis Alvarado 02 January 2009

Nicely put. We all need to hear that song and be encouraged to go on! !

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