God Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

God

Rating: 5.0


there was He,
there is and will be
but in the mind- of Him like the silent grave
Alive; shapeless shape-shifting
none sees ever though all were
age after ages the talkers of His name
place to place the bearers died unanimously
"All who used to ask the address of Him
In no time He got vanished"
yet His name is Alive in that grave of Mind
it's the Mahtab where the Love loves to stay
under the Death of revealing sword



(7/30/2020 11: 42: 00 PM) Chattogram

Friday, July 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: god,thinking
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
from my comment on "He Was, When It Was Aught" Poem by Mirza Ghalib
(7/30/2020 11: 42: 00 PM)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 02 August 2020

DJ feels you were confused while writing this poem. What does thus this means: but in the mind- of Him like the silent grave. This is very absurd thinking about HIM. Check the language. May be you could not put your true feelings in it.

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Aarzoo Mehek 31 July 2020

na thā kuchh to ḳhudā thā kuchh na hotā to ḳhudā hotā Duboyā mujh ko hone ne na hotā maiñ to kyā hotā This said it all. Beautiful poem.10++ for my fav poet Mirza Ghalib.

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M Asim Nehal 31 July 2020

One will fall short of words, pen, vocabulary to shower praises for one and only, our creator and sustainer the most gracious and the most merciful the Almighty God.

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Varsha M 31 July 2020

Very true. He is there where he aught to be.

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Dipak adhya 31 July 2020

Good thinking... And well written with a philosophical view.,

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