Going Home Poem by duncan wyllie

Going Home

Rating: 5.0


Solid as rock, Six feet or more
Punch like a hammer that
Never would fall
Scars like a trellis
His drinking’s no gain
Cigarette’s hanging
Life’s just the same
Nobody knew him
Man of the street
One day, was different
Old lady, seems
Sweet
Blinded since birth
The market square,
Flowers
Perfect in sunshine
Burning for hours
Please sir, draw-
Nearer
This one’s for free
I know that you’re hurting
So I’ll comfort thee
Fighting back fears
Was always your game
But fighting back tears
Can be quite the same
Sit by my feet
A story, unfolds
I’ve come from a place
That never grows old
Where Sunshine is measured
By beauty it’s true
Now close your eyes gently
Feel wings around you
Take a deep breath
Angels
They sing
Voices from Heaven
Find you again

Morning, alone
People would gather
To witness a sight
None could easily utter
For there in the market square
A hundred white roses
Where before lay a man
Now a hundred
White poses

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 02 April 2009

What a beautiful story Duncan, told by the master himself. Just wonderful. Best wishes, Andrew

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 04 April 2009

So touching, read it twice and it got even better - well done Duncan - Cindy

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Ernestine Northover 05 April 2009

WOW! this speaks of roses all the way. What a beautiful storyline and a real treat to read this one. Excellent poem, just perfect. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Nimal Dunuhinga 05 April 2009

The best touching journey!

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David Gerardino 16 March 2012

DUNCAN, im not sure if i like the poem/story, , , , , , , , , , but i got to say, , its got has a punch.

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Duh Huh 13 April 2009

Your poems just have a way with my heart. Vivi imagery that unfolded as i read. Thank you very much for sharing :)

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John W Fenn 12 April 2009

Bravo Duncan, this was piece was very moving, loved it John

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~ Jon London ~ 12 April 2009

Duncan what can I say, this is one of the finest pieces i have ever read, Bravo

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Sandra Fowler 07 April 2009

You deserve a garden of roses for this beautiful story of redemption. A quality poem from a quality poet.10 all the way. Warmest regards, Sandra

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