Golden Age Is Coming Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Golden Age Is Coming

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Golden age is coming, it is confluence age,
Gracious you should be and be like sage.
Good qualities are always good and adorable,
Grateful are these and these are favorable.

Godly person you should be purity should be aimed,
Go on meditation to God and never be blamed.
Gingerly do your work; you mustn't kill any insect,
Greed may ruin the life, avoid it and do perfect.

Grief can't disturb your mind if you will be stable,
Grimace will never arise, to fetch you can able.
Ghouls are everywhere, be aware of them,
Ghastly situation is coming make it tame.

Gimcrack life you shouldn't lead, be simple,
Gimlet eye you should have every time in ample.
Grind your sins and do always noble work,
Grip tolerance and avoid nonviolence murk.

Grogginess on earth will be felt by all,
Groping will main only, in earthquake edifices fall.
Gutless will be survived God will save them,
Gusto you take in righteous deeds and in God's name.

Gunfight can’t harm you will reach to golden age in ease
Gutless you shouldn't be, virtuous deeds will rise.
Gain happy and prosperous life in golden age you think,
Gyro is soul, body is frail, and with supreme soul have link.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet’s Note about the Poem
Here poet thinks about Golden Age how it brings happiness and prosperous. What step should be taken before? Now it is confluence age, horrible sights will appear. So we should lead life having good qualities. We should be merciful and adorable like sage. We must meditate God. We must acquire purity. We should work cautiously; even we shouldn't kill an insect. We have to avoid greediness. We should be stable, we shouldn't care to grief. We should be away from ghouls. We should have gimlet eyes, and we should grind our sins. We will feel grogginess of earth. In earthquake large edifices will collapse. So we must meditate God. He will save us. We must perform virtuous deeds. Soul is eternal. We must have next birth and it is in golden age where there will be no war or gunfight. This is the theme of the poem in brief. This is written in Sambalpur, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
Glossary
Gingerly - cautiously
Grimace - distortion face made in disgust or intended to cause amusement
Ghoul - person of revolting tastes and habits
Ghastly - horrible/frightful
Gimcrack - showy
Gimlet - eye with a piercing glance
Grip - grasp tightly
Grogginess - unsteady/tottering
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 08 June 2015

I think your poet's notes may be superior to the poem itself. I would like to see you write more in the style of your notes, forgoing the devices of Same letter initiation and forced rhyme. You have much wisdom at your disposal but it loses some of its power when constrained to echoing. Just my opinion, Kumarmani, and meant as constructive commentary. Peace

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Akhtar Jawad 08 June 2015

A nice poem that makes the reader optimistic for a golden future yet to come.................10

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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

We love the coming of Golden age. Gyro is soul, body is frail. Due to mercy of Supreme soul we live happily. This is an excellent poem really.

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Mihaela Pirjol 04 October 2018

This poem brings hope; hope for a spiritual, golden age, when cruelty shall cease, and elevate humanity to a higher state of consciousness.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2016

picture of Keith Labonte xreally creative. great job 8 Jun 2015 by Keith Labonte | Reply picture of Matthias Pantaleon xTo live a Godly life to gracious enough. Wide imagery, strong diction! 3 Jul 2015 by Matthias Pantaleon | Reply

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 June 2015

Beautiful way of rhyming with the first letter G. Golden age, good deeds, and Godly actions are referred to. Gorgeous poem indeed.

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 June 2015

We should always hope for the golden days amidst violence and bloodshed all around. Positive and inspiring drop.Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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