Gone Poem by Aqua Flower

Gone

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Gone are the days
where love reflects
now all I see
is defects
I am lost
my destination is not on the map
I lay here weeping
I want my life back

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Friday, December 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: changes,loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Holloway 21 December 2018

a tragic yet beautiful write

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Aqua Flower 22 December 2018

Life is full of changes...fear sometimes keeps us from making them when necessary. Thank you for reading and for your comment my friend!

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Bill Cantrell 14 December 2018

Loss is a hard thing to deal with, I find poetry and friends helps and time, it’s sad to look at a beautiful sunset and to think you will never see it again but the next sunset seems to take its place, nice poem

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Aqua Flower 15 December 2018

A nice description about happy life (sunsets) . Good thing that sunsets and sunrises never go away. There is always hope! Thank you for your words!

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Kostas Lagos 14 December 2018

Life is a river. What is left behind is gone. But there are many new things ahead. Nice poem!

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Aqua Flower 15 December 2018

Describing life as a river is a good analogy. The flow of life can drown you or you can learn to be a good swimmer. :) thank you dear friend.

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