Aqua Flower

Come Home To Me - Poem by Aqua Flower

Come home to me
I will be your sanctuary
wash the stress of
all that makes you worry
let me make love to you
and keep you warm the whole night through
Come home to me
and let me be your one and only

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams, passion

Comments about Come Home To Me by Aqua Flower

  • Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair (2/13/2019 12:09:00 AM)

    You have succeeded in containing a sea of love and passion in a small shell of poem. Congratulations being placed in POD (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower (2/13/2019 5:01:00 PM)

    A belated thank you my friend. I love how you describe the Sea of Love inside of shell of a poem. So poetically expressed! Thank you again nation point

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  • (2/12/2019 11:19:00 PM)

    A flow of intense emotions with rhyme and rhythm of life. Congrats on the poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower (2/13/2019 7:54:00 PM)

    A belated thank you for a lovely comment!

  • Practicing Poetess (2/12/2019 9:09:00 PM)

    Short, sweet, and perfect for Valentine's Day! We all long for and need a 'sanctuary.'
    Congrats on being selected for Member Poem of the Day!
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    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 10:05:00 PM)

    So good to hear from you my friend and thank you for your thoughtful comments. It was nice to be selected during Valentine's week especially one of the my love poems.. Happy Valentine's Day to you!

  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (2/12/2019 7:43:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem full of love and passion.
    Who could resist such invitation so tenderly given?
    Beautifully crafted and well executed write.
    A well deserved POTD in celebration of Valentine's Day.
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    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 9:00:00 PM)

    Thank you dear poetess...your comments are always welcomed and appreciated! Happy Valentine's day to you!

  • Lyn Paul (2/12/2019 3:16:00 PM)

    May your life be filled with love and happiness. (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 7:36:00 PM)

    Hi and thank you my dear friend and you too. Happy Valentine's Day to you!

  • Jennifer Birchall (2/12/2019 1:57:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem for your love. A much deserved potd Aqua. (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 7:37:00 PM)

    So sweet of a comment thank you!

  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/12/2019 1:41:00 PM)

    Let me make love to you! ! ! !

    Love and art.

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Bill Cantrell (2/12/2019 11:01:00 AM)

    Well well, I must say I was delighted to see this poem selected as POTD, there is indeed no place like home, especially when love and passion find themselves hand in hand in a dream, congrats! ! Well deserved! (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 11:50:00 AM)

    Yes, home is not a place but rather represents our soulmate. When we go to them, it is like coming home. As always, I am appreciative of your comments!

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (2/12/2019 7:56:00 AM)

    Superb love poem......Inviting love to come and reside and in return you will shower love is perfect give and take.10+++ Congrats for the honours " POTD" (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 8:10:00 AM)

    Love is always a give and take. If it is one sided....things fall apart. Thank you so much for your comments..Truly appreciated.

  • Khairul Ahsan (2/12/2019 6:48:00 AM)

    " When love is in your heart for someone, it is so easy for the words to flow." (Your reply to a comment below) - I fully agree with you. Very true and very nicely said! (Report) Reply

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (2/12/2019 6:19:00 AM)

    I will be your sanctuary! What a great expression! Many congratulations for this lovely poem being selected as Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

  • Rae Seagull (2/12/2019 6:18:00 AM)

    What a tender romantic invite! Many congratulations, Aqua Flower! Well deserved (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 8:08:00 AM)

    Thank you Rae Seagull.....I so appreciate your comment! :)

  • Prabir Gayen (2/12/2019 5:54:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem on love.......///// (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 6:12:00 AM)

    Thank you! I appreciate your comment. Have a lovely day!

  • (2/12/2019 5:40:00 AM)

    Beautiful invitation,
    With the delicate tenderness and love
    That only a true poetic heart can express.

    Very lovely work and great choice for Poem of the Day.
    Honor to who honor deserves.
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    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 8:11:00 AM)

    From a writer of love poems yourself, a great honor to have you reply and comment! Thank you dear poetess! Have a wonderful valentine's day full of love!

  • Jez Brul (2/12/2019 3:05:00 AM)

    Such a passionate short poem outpouring with love ans sweetness...what more could a lover ask for more? Congrats dear Aqua Flower for a well-deserved POD. (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 5:04:00 AM)

    Such a lovely comment dear poetess! Yes, what more can a lover ask for? When love is in your heart for someone, it is so easy for the words to flow.

  • Adrian Flett (2/12/2019 2:45:00 AM)

    'Come home to me' Is this a cry for the mending of lost love? Or is it a call to reunite? (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 5:03:00 AM)

    It is a call to " unite" ...not reunite. Thank you for reading and your comments!

  • Khairul Ahsan (2/12/2019 2:43:00 AM)

    Love the warmth flowing through the lines of the poem. The invitation is ardent and passionate; that's the beauty!
    Congratulations, dear poetess, on your poem getting the honor that it so well deserved!
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    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 5:09:00 AM)

    Love and passion flows easily when feelings are true. The invitation will always be there for him to come " home" . Thank you for your comments.

  • (2/12/2019 2:37:00 AM)

    Beautifully phrased romantic invitation to the partner, most probably at the most needed moment. Great stuff. Congrats on your placement as PoD. (Report) Reply

    (2/12/2019 5:16:00 AM)

    Love is always needed some days more. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Much appreciated and Happy Valentine's day to you!

  • Carl Roussell (2/12/2019 2:11:00 AM)

    So much feeling expressed in your words, and a very deserved POD. Congratulation! (Report) Reply

    Carl Roussell (2/12/2019 8:12:00 AM)

    I came back for another read and want to say the way the first two lines and last two lines rhyme is a really cool bit of writing technique! !

    Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 5:20:00 AM)

    Thank you Carl for feeling the words expressed in this short write. To have such feelings in your heart always makes it easier to write them. Happy Valentine's day not only to all the lovers out there but also to friends. Love makes the world a much better place!

  • Sylvia Frances Chan (2/12/2019 2:11:00 AM)

    (3) ...Imagine that a poet regards this as a true invitation, how many One and Only´s would you have finally, since this depends on your choice. Or am I too serious in reading this loveliest gem, dear Aqua? ONE THING I know that you have created a dashing loveliest Gem, an 8-liners poem, fully deserving this. Magnificently worded in a Unique way. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 1, 2018

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