Good Catch Poem by ONElia AVElar

Good Catch

Rating: 3.0


long hair spread on a blue pillow
her fishing-net full, a good catch
sweet dreams and a man's sunken head
deep in her blue fairy pillow...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Coach Roth 02 July 2008

Wonderful snapshot of a moment with so much more unsaid...beautiful...Coach

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My liking for One is known. Nicely I notice this symbol of man caught in a fishing net. This author is communicative and deserved an Ode.

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Marvin Brato 21 May 2008

A poem so short but full of substantial imaginations! A 10.

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R H 15 May 2008

A dreamy write that captures a moment of tenderness in 4 succinct but poetic lines. justine.

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Original Unknown Girl 29 April 2008

Mmm... sounds like a Mer-man! Love it! HG; -) xx

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Original Unknown Girl 30 June 2009

This reminds me of the Little Mermaid (not the Disney one) but the age-old story... It is very pretty and says so much in so few words. Very clever word-weaving my friend. HG: -) xx

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R.k Das 07 May 2009

i loved this poem for its sheer beauty, , it capsules the emotion and imagery with its beautiful compactness, it throws open many variety of interpretation, , , ,

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Chitra - 30 January 2009

a succinct poem..dreamcatcher...wonderful imagery

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 September 2008

A composition of a dream, an image of love.10..

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Janice Windle 04 September 2008

Beautiful - a mermaid, a siren and an enchantress, all pictured in four lines.

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