long hair spread on a blue pillow
her fishing-net full, a good catch
sweet dreams and a man's sunken head
deep in her blue fairy pillow...
My liking for One is known. Nicely I notice this symbol of man caught in a fishing net. This author is communicative and deserved an Ode.
A dreamy write that captures a moment of tenderness in 4 succinct but poetic lines. justine.
This reminds me of the Little Mermaid (not the Disney one) but the age-old story... It is very pretty and says so much in so few words. Very clever word-weaving my friend. HG: -) xx
i loved this poem for its sheer beauty, , it capsules the emotion and imagery with its beautiful compactness, it throws open many variety of interpretation, , , ,
Beautiful - a mermaid, a siren and an enchantress, all pictured in four lines.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful snapshot of a moment with so much more unsaid...beautiful...Coach