ONElia AVElar

Rookie - 46 Points (Bulgaria)

Good Catch - Poem by ONElia AVElar

long hair spread on a blue pillow
her fishing-net full, a good catch
sweet dreams and a man's sunken head
deep in her blue fairy pillow...

Comments about Good Catch by ONElia AVElar

  • (6/30/2009 10:41:00 AM)

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    This reminds me of the Little Mermaid (not the Disney one) but the age-old story...
    It is very pretty and says so much in so few words. Very clever word-weaving my friend. HG: -) xx
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  • (5/7/2009 1:31:00 AM)

    i loved this poem for its sheer beauty, , it capsules the emotion and imagery with its beautiful compactness, it throws open many variety of interpretation, , , , (Report) Reply

  • (1/30/2009 7:20:00 AM)

    a succinct poem..dreamcatcher...wonderful imagery (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/8/2008 1:39:00 PM)

    A composition of a dream, an image of love.10.. (Report) Reply

  • (9/4/2008 4:55:00 AM)

    Beautiful - a mermaid, a siren and an enchantress, all pictured in four lines. (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2008 3:11:00 AM)

    Wonderful snapshot of a moment with so much more unsaid...beautiful...Coach (Report) Reply

  • Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (6/9/2008 3:49:00 PM)

    My liking for One is known. Nicely I notice this symbol of man caught in a fishing net. This author is communicative and deserved an Ode. (Report) Reply

  • (5/21/2008 6:07:00 AM)

    A poem so short but full of substantial imaginations! A 10. (Report) Reply

  • (5/15/2008 4:40:00 AM)

    A dreamy write that captures a moment of tenderness in 4 succinct but poetic lines. justine. (Report) Reply

  • (4/29/2008 7:18:00 AM)

    Mmm... sounds like a Mer-man! Love it! HG; -) xx (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2008 9:00:00 PM)

    Caught me!
    Lovely poem O....
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  • (4/17/2008 8:03:00 AM)

    Your dreamcatcher, mancatcher pillow! Happy hunting, One!
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (4/17/2008 8:03:00 AM)

    yet the marvel alone
    simlply dazzling over blue
    dreams when splendoured unequalled
    across the sweetness of the soul...............a unique poem by the luscious green with ingenuity, i do simply adfmire the way you paints the atr by the softness with gentle words, great write, it demands 10+, thanks dear Onlia for sharing
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  • (4/17/2008 3:42:00 AM)

    Less a victim - more a willing sacrifice is my guess. Delicious. Rgds, Ivan (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 17, 2008

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