long hair spread on a blue pillow
her fishing-net full, a good catch
sweet dreams and a man's sunken head
deep in her blue fairy pillow...
yet the marvel alone simlply dazzling over blue dreams when splendoured unequalled across the sweetness of the soul...............a unique poem by the luscious green with ingenuity, i do simply adfmire the way you paints the atr by the softness with gentle words, great write, it demands 10+, thanks dear Onlia for sharing
Your dreamcatcher, mancatcher pillow! Happy hunting, One! F
This reminds me of the Little Mermaid (not the Disney one) but the age-old story... It is very pretty and says so much in so few words. Very clever word-weaving my friend. HG: -) xx
i loved this poem for its sheer beauty, , it capsules the emotion and imagery with its beautiful compactness, it throws open many variety of interpretation, , , ,
Beautiful - a mermaid, a siren and an enchantress, all pictured in four lines.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Less a victim - more a willing sacrifice is my guess. Delicious. Rgds, Ivan