Good Godzilla Poem by Tailor Bell

Good Godzilla

Rating: 4.8


I wish all day
That I was small
I turn to fast
And things just fall, away

Build up courage
To come to town
My clumsy ways
Just make the locals frown

Caught in a pool
Of rejection
Electric apprehension
Checkers my day

Float back toward the tidal pool
The city in chaos
From Gamera and robot-me

Always try to not be rude
Avoid my feet
As I walk so carefully
Like good-Godzilla

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 29 August 2006

Great poem. I'd like to write more, but I hear my Mothra calling... -chuck

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Barbara James 16 August 2006

Cute Poem, Tailor. I think you are very talented

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Brian Dorn 16 August 2006

Tailor, a unique and clever write... I'm sure it would be a huge hit in Japan! ! Different, but very well done! ! Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 07 August 2006

There is something really captivating in this one, Awesome My favourite part: Build up courage To come to town My clumsy ways Just make the locals frown Love duncan XXX

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Declan McHenry 01 August 2006

Aw, come on! Knock those buildings down! A neat piece though comrade.

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Bri Edwards 21 November 2019

line 3: use " too" Poor Godzilla! ! bri :)

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Chuck Audette 12 June 2009

Great poem. Poor Godzilla! So misunderstood! -chuck

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 08 April 2009

i like it wow u amazing

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ngaio beck 30 August 2008

Ah Yes.Let's all go back to the primordial tidal pools and maybe this time we'll get lucky.

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 27 April 2008

...rarely one might be tempted to call anything 'giant', or anything about giants, or a Godzilla for this matter, justifiedly as being cute. Maybe just with your nice little poem comes the unknown exemption...

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