Riding on the waves of sorrow and mirth
Traverses life of human if the sail is smooth.
Hurricanes n tornado with mountainous tides
No doubt to it capsize n it's doom they decide.
Every human being, being an unique boat
Sails in the ocean as destined since birth.
Joyous may be the sail or may it be tumultuous
Positive approach though makes it picturesque.
Thoughts, if negative make it a trawler,
Dragging heaps of grief in it's net.
Dumping the sorrow needs expertise great
Inculcated that can be only by Preacher.
Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat
Ensures good teacher and his radiates.
This is such a wonderful poem. You have so honestly written what a teacher does. It is our approach to the teachings that makes it different. In particular i like the way you have expressed what happens if we take it negatively.: Dragging heaps of grief in it's net. Dumping the sorrow needs expertise great inspirational at any point of time in our lifes. not just as a student.
Every human being, being an unique boat Sails in the ocean as destined since birth. incalculated can be the gifts of the Preacher! one of these gifts - is your poetry!
Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates.....outstanding conceptualization. A brilliant poem on teacher is astutely delineated. Visited this poem time and again.
I hope that students thought I was a good teacher. You have come up with a precise sonnet here, which I like. You imply that a teacher is like a preacher-a brilliant idea.
Every human being, being an unique boat/Sails in the ocean as destined since birth/Joyous may be the sail or may it be tumultuous/Positive approach though makes it picturesque...touching expression! A great poem that invites me to read it time and again!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A well written poem, Ratnakar. Thanks for sharing Peace