Good Teacher Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Good Teacher

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Riding on the waves of sorrow and mirth
Traverses life of human if the sail is smooth.
Hurricanes n tornado with mountainous tides
No doubt to it capsize n it's doom they decide.

Every human being, being an unique boat
Sails in the ocean as destined since birth.
Joyous may be the sail or may it be tumultuous
Positive approach though makes it picturesque.

Thoughts, if negative make it a trawler,
Dragging heaps of grief in it's net.
Dumping the sorrow needs expertise great
Inculcated that can be only by Preacher.

Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat
Ensures good teacher and his radiates.

Wednesday, July 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: human nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 26 August 2015

A well written poem, Ratnakar. Thanks for sharing Peace

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 16 September 2015

This is such a wonderful poem. You have so honestly written what a teacher does. It is our approach to the teachings that makes it different. In particular i like the way you have expressed what happens if we take it negatively.: Dragging heaps of grief in it's net. Dumping the sorrow needs expertise great inspirational at any point of time in our lifes. not just as a student.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 September 2015

Thank you very much for your inspirational comments.

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Liza Sudina 03 October 2015

Every human being, being an unique boat Sails in the ocean as destined since birth. incalculated can be the gifts of the Preacher! one of these gifts - is your poetry!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 October 2015

Thank you very much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 August 2019

Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates.....outstanding conceptualization. A brilliant poem on teacher is astutely delineated. Visited this poem time and again.

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Michael Walker 23 July 2019

I hope that students thought I was a good teacher. You have come up with a precise sonnet here, which I like. You imply that a teacher is like a preacher-a brilliant idea.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 June 2019

Every human being, being an unique boat/Sails in the ocean as destined since birth/Joyous may be the sail or may it be tumultuous/Positive approach though makes it picturesque...touching expression! A great poem that invites me to read it time and again!

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Anjandev Roy 20 June 2019

Great write. Profound poem.Anjandev Roy.

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Manonton Dalan 12 June 2019

great poem i enjoyed reading it thanks

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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