Gurudakshina Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Gurudakshina

Rating: 5.0


Eklavya, the resolute youth tribal,
A genius he was and a worker solo
He toiled and toiled to master archery
Idol of Drona was Guru of the visionary.
Every thing was well still he studied
Solo, incognito away in a jungle,
Scaling heights to be greatest archer.

One day perhaps during hunting,
There occurred a sudden chance meeting
Betwixt disciple and his coveted Guru
Overjoyed he was unlike his guru
Whose wrath was invited by his command
Over archery achieved through devotion,
Solo practice, faith and confidence.

Tribal's achievement stunned guru Drona,
Superior archer may jeopardize Arjuna,
His dearest disciple n a Pandu prince,
Felt he n decided to use own prudence
For removing the thorn in path of Arjuna.
Eklavya's honesty and for him loyalty
Gifted own thumbs to Drona in Gurudakshina.

@ Ratnakar D Mandlik

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Based on characters in Indian epic Mahabharata and displayes human strengths in form of Eklavya attaining mastery in archery by solo practice and hard work. Human weakness depicted by act of Drona, the archery teacher of Pandva prince who couldnot tolerated any one to surpass in it's skill over his dearest desciple and demands thumbs of Eklavya as Gurudakshina(return gift)for being teacher in exile.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 02 November 2020

superb and excellently written on Gurudakshina from the famous Indian Epic Mahabharata; Gurudakshina- the Honorarium of the Master, master of Soul, master of enlightenment; yes- for true disciple it needs to pay to the master anyhow, anywhere, anytime// thanks for sharing this

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The tragedy of Ekalavya is a lesson to the loyal and sincere people who consider themselves indebted to somebody who in turn exploit the ethics. A very good poem deserving felicitations

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Indira Renganathan 09 December 2020

Very much refreshing to read a Mahabharata story...highly a commendable poem 5 stars

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 December 2020

For removing the thorn in path of Arjuna. Eklavya's honesty and for him loyalty Gifted own thumbs to Drona in Gurudakshina........here the sacrifice of Eklavya as Gurudakshina(return gift) for being teacher in exile is wellreaveled. The selfish nature of Drona Guru was known to all in the story of Mahabharata. So beautifully executed. Thank you dear Ratnakar Ji.

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Anjandev Roy 27 November 2020

Great representation......thanks for sharing.....anjandev roy.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 November 2020

The story of Ekalavya in Mahabharata is both touching and heart rending. There never can be a greater 'Gurudakshina' than given by Ekalavya to his secret Guru Dronacharya. But the cruelty and selfishness shown by Guru Dronacharya can never be forgiven. Here, the name of Ekalavya is ever remembered as an ideal Shishya. Ratnakar ji, So good to read a poem on Ekalavya. Thank you for sharing. Top marks

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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