it is really a hard time
when you go away,
for you gave me so many things
which were really wonderful...
though a bit of bitterness
before you leave,
it didnot put me down
as it showed me what life is...
just like leaving a good friend
you are going to leave me
and i hope that my next friend
will be somewhat like you...
Excellent poem/ i really like this one! ! Each year gives us many memories and we living in that memories in the coming year! ! Top marks! ! ! !
Excellent poem/ i really like this one! ! Each year gives us many memories and we living in that memories in the coming year! ! Top marks! ! ! !
Your next friend will be more lovable than this one...Happy new year!
nice thought, we all hope the new year brings happiness with it and give thanks for what we already have received.
it's late to say goodbye to beloved 2011 now, still i will.you've written a nice poem, again, your poem deals with things in a new perspective.that's great, and genuine.
Nice poem, we always hope for the better...hope your new friend will treat you even better...
Nice use of personification...liked it a lot...keep them coming. -SG
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Gentle usage of personification and beautiful thoughts for the bygone and the upcoming year.Nice work.