Goodbye To 2011! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by NEETHA SASIDHARAN

Goodbye To 2011! ! ! ! ! ! !

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it is really a hard time
when you go away,
for you gave me so many things
which were really wonderful...

though a bit of bitterness
before you leave,
it didnot put me down
as it showed me what life is...

just like leaving a good friend
you are going to leave me
and i hope that my next friend
will be somewhat like you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rekha Mandagere 05 January 2012

Gentle usage of personification and beautiful thoughts for the bygone and the upcoming year.Nice work.

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Vipins Puthooran 04 January 2012

Excellent poem/ i really like this one! ! Each year gives us many memories and we living in that memories in the coming year! ! Top marks! ! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 04 January 2012

Excellent poem/ i really like this one! ! Each year gives us many memories and we living in that memories in the coming year! ! Top marks! ! ! !

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Minu Alex 04 January 2012

Your next friend will be more lovable than this one...Happy new year!

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Priya Gupta 04 January 2012

hiiii neetha.. happy new year....

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Mark Dillon 15 August 2012

nice thought, we all hope the new year brings happiness with it and give thanks for what we already have received.

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it's late to say goodbye to beloved 2011 now, still i will.you've written a nice poem, again, your poem deals with things in a new perspective.that's great, and genuine.

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C N Prem Kumar 17 February 2012

Short and touchy poem. Keep writing.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 09 January 2012

Nice poem, we always hope for the better...hope your new friend will treat you even better...

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Shadow Girl 07 January 2012

Nice use of personification...liked it a lot...keep them coming. -SG

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