Great Eagle Poem by Valerie Dohren

Great Eagle

Rating: 4.8


Great eagle spread your golden wings
Above the world, my load to bear
Transport me to the realm of kings
That I may find some solace there

Across the wooded land to fly
Then mingle with the salted air
Where`er the silver seagulls cry
To thus relinquish all despair

With breeze as sweet as ether`s breath
Empyreal, above compare
Oh carry me to mystic death
Celestial beauty shining fair

Go forth where all good souls are free
Above, beyond, without a care
Unchained from all that captures me
My heart to tether and ensnare

Great eagle spread your golden wings
Ascend upon the starlit stair
To so unbind above all things
This leaden heart, unmasked, laid bare

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
G.R. Gaus 17 April 2012

Mark Twain once wrote; The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter, it's the difference between the lightning bug and lightning. You have certainly mastered the lightning part. Nice Flowing motion of words.

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Eric Cockrell 17 April 2012

the prayer of the soul yearning for freedom! great poem.

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Steven Cooke 22 April 2012

Love the images in this one. Excellent write

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Danny Draper 21 April 2012

Such wings set free in metaphor, above this earthly world to soar and free us in sublime verse once more.

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Smoky Hoss 18 April 2012

The spiritual sensation of soaring, how sweet it surely is!

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Valsa George 11 August 2012

What poignancy of feeling..... An anguished soul seeking to be freed of all fetters and merge with the blessed souls of Heaven..... Only a master craftsman can pack such a torrent of emotions in so concise a poem ! ! ! GREAT ! !

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Captain Cur 09 June 2012

Where the eagle soars, we are free. Wonderful, deep and symbolic poem. Great write.

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Melissa Carey 24 April 2012

WOW! ! ! ! ! Amazing! ! ! ! !

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Juan Olivarez 23 April 2012

Wow, what a piece, wow. Absolutely great.

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Hans Vr 23 April 2012

Valerie, This poem goes very deep. It is beautiful, touching, moving. The dream of the eagle lifting us up from our sorrows. A masterpiece of poetry

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