. ≫ I Miss That Rose Poem by Eyan Desir

. ≫ I Miss That Rose

Rating: 3.3


The beauty in a rose
Breathe joy in many lives
When it is gone
Bitterness of it's love
Keeps kicking my chest
Emptiness fills my head

My mouth waters
My soul hungers
My heart suffers
My skin shivers
I miss that rose

The moments we shared
The laughter it brought
The days of comfort
I miss that rose
The way it sweeten my life

22th May 2009
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
J.J. Bradford 07 June 2009

thats some good symbolism, i can relate...great job

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Not A Dream Choice 04 June 2009

Well witten...I miss my rose too...

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Allysyn Bryant 03 June 2009

a sweet poem very nice

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Miriam Maia Padua 03 June 2009

lovely crafted... so sweet a poem... expressive.... 10+++ and my vote, my friend _maia_

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Ravi Sathasivam 03 June 2009

'My mouth waters. My soul hungers My heart suffers My skin shivers I miss that rose' Its sad but beautifully written. I felt very deep in my heart. Take care

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Desiree Burdick 27 March 2010

such a beautiful poem

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Jean Dament 16 January 2010

A heartfelt, sweet poem about love & loss. Well done. in the last line you have 'sweeten'-it should be 'sweetened' ok Thanks for sharing your talents with us. Spiritsong

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Lady Grace 28 June 2009

this rose is a lucky one..very beautiful friend..grace

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Sherif Monem 15 June 2009

Very beautiful poem.

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sky dreams 10 June 2009

a rose is a great symbol to use for a lost love.. i really enjoyed reading this

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