The beauty in a rose
Breathe joy in many lives
When it is gone
Bitterness of it's love
Keeps kicking my chest
Emptiness fills my head
My mouth waters
My soul hungers
My heart suffers
My skin shivers
I miss that rose
The moments we shared
The laughter it brought
The days of comfort
I miss that rose
The way it sweeten my life
22th May 2009
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lovely crafted... so sweet a poem... expressive.... 10+++ and my vote, my friend _maia_
'My mouth waters. My soul hungers My heart suffers My skin shivers I miss that rose' Its sad but beautifully written. I felt very deep in my heart. Take care
A heartfelt, sweet poem about love & loss. Well done. in the last line you have 'sweeten'-it should be 'sweetened' ok Thanks for sharing your talents with us. Spiritsong
a rose is a great symbol to use for a lost love.. i really enjoyed reading this
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
thats some good symbolism, i can relate...great job