The beauty in a rose
Breathe joy in many lives
When it is gone
Bitterness of it's love
Keeps kicking my chest
Emptiness fills my head
My mouth waters
My soul hungers
My heart suffers
My skin shivers
I miss that rose
The moments we shared
The laughter it brought
The days of comfort
I miss that rose
The way it sweeten my life
22th May 2009
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great poem really atleast it didnt concern to much rythming which to me is kind of irrating and senseless so job well done, i will keep on reading some of your materials
A heartfelt, sweet poem about love & loss. Well done. in the last line you have 'sweeten'-it should be 'sweetened' ok Thanks for sharing your talents with us. Spiritsong
a rose is a great symbol to use for a lost love.. i really enjoyed reading this
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Anice poem. The first few lines really elevate the poem.