Clip after clip
life after life,
man has made guns
who needs a knife?
Evil men's ways have
drove us to war.
Bullets will slice trough air
untill man exist no more.
Sorry to say that war
will not end.
Untill we set down guns
and all cultures mend.
So many dead and
what have we to show?
The atomic and nuclear bombs
that are droped to the Earth below?
Beautifully said Alan...I lov3 it so much...keep the peace **Tyease**
i would love for the gun to drop for the guns to stop maybe one day it will happen when everyone will learn to have a heart make more of these young rebel
You are a young man with a heart. That always makes for good poetry. I thought your effort here was commendable. Commendable is a word that is used to compliment someone who did most things right but got some others wrong. These are all things you will learn by doing, as they say, and watching. Very nice! GW62
I love your writing! It speaks the truth! ! Keep on writing your amazing XOXO, Kolee
very good! keep it up
Thats some deep stuff, man. Keep it up, dude.
well written...nice job! ! !
straight forward and gets right to the point, good work
deep. beautiful. rockin. wut more can i say?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
I liked teh writing very much though...oh nvm just good Job!