Rage'n Curtis

Hell

The lake of fire
the devil's domain,
were ungodly souls
are doomed to remain.

Gargantuan mountains
of brimstone and flame.
So many spirits
being tortured in pain.

The sky is red
with lightning thats black.
The thunder roars loud
as a bolt gives off a crack.

Human shaped flames
desend from the sky.
The souls of human beings
that deserved to die.

Ther're forced to work
the hammers pound,
to wear away the
outstreched ground.

They're arms and legs
are latched with chain.
The thought of the sorrow
is simply insane.

Satin sits watching
so high on his throne.
As he looks up above
no expressions are shown.


He thinks in his head.
'Judgement day is near
and all will be dead.'

Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 15, 2007
Poem Edited: Friday, December 14, 2012

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  • Eyan Desir (11/30/2009 1:56:00 PM)

    And all will be joining him in hell......
    Hell is eternal suffering
    death is to easy for evil men.....
    good expression

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  • Callie Valentine (5/28/2009 11:57:00 PM)

    Oh my goodness, I love this! This is definitely one of the best poems I've ever read on this website.10.
    :)

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  • Krista Thomas (5/28/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    dude this is an awesome poem... good work. i love it. keep writing.

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  • ~Heart of Ice~ ¢♦ ¢♦ ¢ (5/26/2009 6:43:00 PM)

    love it! ! ! your words speak the truth and the truth comes forth in your poem! awesome! ! you explain things well! ;)

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  • Elizabeth Resendiz (5/19/2009 11:12:00 AM)

    total awesomeness man!

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  • Black Rose . (5/19/2009 9:48:00 AM)

    Awesome flow lol
    interesting perspective lol

    xoxoxxxxxx Black Rose

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  • Jazz Annis (5/14/2009 3:17:00 PM)

    this poem...it speaks to whom ever reads it...you got some gift goin' on here...

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  • Mandy BullmanMandy Bullman (5/14/2009 6:13:00 AM)

    hell..............excellent stuff hope i aint goin there lol

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  • Rose Cook (5/2/2009 11:55:00 PM)

    i love this poem my favorite so far

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  • Try and UnDeRStANd mE ....i promise im normal (5/1/2009 6:36:00 PM)

    That was hip hippy lol... no i love that u let us get into ur thoughts like u place us in your head so we can c what ur seeing

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  • ~ br0k3n h3artz hurt l! k3 H3ll~ (4/29/2009 4:36:00 PM)

    this is a great poem.......10

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  • Akram SaqibAkram Saqib (4/27/2009 12:53:00 PM)

    good description of hell hippy

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  • Jaki Moore...forever... (3/30/2009 12:57:00 PM)

    cool poem...i like that it rhymes... :)

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  • Sunset moonshine (2/26/2009 12:35:00 PM)

    this is awsome i love it...

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  • Sage of Time (8/8/2008 10:18:00 PM)

    that...is...AWESOME! ! ! !
    p.s.- your poems are the shit!

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  • Emo Seb (7/29/2008 5:45:00 PM)

    so true. hopefully u and i wont b dead. nor any1 else, except 4 a few some. no need to start on that now.

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  • Linda Weischedel (7/8/2008 3:52:00 PM)

    Outstanding poem,
    I so enjoyed reading it.
    ~Linda~

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  • Andrea Rivera (7/1/2008 1:45:00 AM)

    this is a great poem, dark yet, so full of light in a sense that it really makes you think about the choices that we've made, your discription is the last place id like to visit..but your choice of words how you discribe everything, it is truly remarkable...keep doing what your doing cause it kicks ass..

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  • Tyease CollinsTyease Collins (6/25/2008 12:54:00 AM)

    Awesome poem! I love dark poetry like this.

    Nice

    **Tyease**

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  • Arabian Heart (6/12/2008 11:04:00 PM)

    such a poem that i read
    but I'm not scared
    for you are right
    bad hell, good heaven
    we all know where we belong

    tell me more of the truth

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