Haiku # 1 Poem by ramesh rai

Haiku # 1

Rating: 5.0


Worth living is life
when the night flower bloom
moon is hidden within
the breast of cloud

Sunday, September 8, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 01 November 2013

moon must shine to brighten the soul of the living!

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Unwritten Soul 09 September 2013

Dont hide dont hide moon, let out to be clear in the zone of night chest! _Soul

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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan 08 September 2013

Interesting composition. But the format is NOT that of haiku! Haiku has three lines, usually with a 5-7-5 syllable scheme. Haiku is the most difficult format of poetry to master (I myself am not good at haiku) . Haiku is a form of meditation, which requires years of practice for perfection. Each of the three lines should evoke a distinct image connected through a very subtle thread.... With devotion and practice, the above poem can be converted to a nice haiku. Good effort.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 September 2013

Beautiful Haiku.LIfe is worth living..

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 September 2013

Life is worth living. Beautiful haiku.

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