Haiku -2 Poem by Sandra Martyres

Haiku -2

Rating: 5.0


Black birds on a tree
Singing melodiously
‘Tis good to be free

Dark clouds looming large
Heavy rains are being forecast
Will the ducks arrive

The garden beckons
The air carries their perfume
Roses in full bloom

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 26 May 2009

Them ducks love rain.

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Naidz Ladia 26 May 2009

this is a nice work, , picture of nature is presented..naizz

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Subroto Chatterjee 26 May 2009

Very enjoyable Nature...Well penned...{I'd love the ducks to 'arrive' instead of survive! ! ] Three cheers, Sandra. Cheers. Subroto

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Sandra Fowler 28 May 2009

Lovely work-black birds, ducks, and roses. Some of my favorite things 10 without hesitation. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

I am delighted from the fragrance of these lovely flowers. My 10 with joy.

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Sue Sie 01 June 2009

The two go together well..Birds and flowers...on natures path..10+ Sue

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I could feel nature throughout all these Haikus. The clouds, the birds and the roses. Very well executed Sandra. 10 Karin Anderson

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Mamta Agarwal 30 May 2009

Very beautiful imagery, lifts the spirits and makes my room fragrant. 10 Mamta

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Anjali Sinha 30 May 2009

and I got a whiff of your roses (haikus) in bloom lovely write a tenner from meeeeeeee anjuuuuuu

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Meggie Gultiano 29 May 2009

very nice Haiku, Sandra. Just learning Haiku, inspired by Ben Gieski's works.

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