Haiku 32 - Dancing Clouds Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 32 - Dancing Clouds

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Thunder plays the drums
Lightning handles flashing light
Clouds stage tribal dance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 25 May 2020

Beautiful orchestra performed by the cloud laden sky! Now the rain will pour down as a beautiful symphony! Lovely haiku!

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Thank you very much for the encouraging words. Thunder and lightning in the clouded sky have been a PADAYANI MELAM for me

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Aarzoo Mehek 06 July 2020

Short and sweet. Lovely thoughts.

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Anjandev Roy 17 June 2020

Such a wonderful write.....thanks. anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 June 2020

Amazing haiku. A poetic gem that portrays a wonderful but scary scenery. Superb imagery.

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Thank you very much dear poetess for the glaring comments of appreciation. The cloudful dark sky where silvery flashes and loud thunder perfor wild dance welcoming the roaring rain has been a fascination for me since my childhood.

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Kostas Lagos 25 May 2020

A stormy dance...excellent!

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Thank you very much dear poet. Please think of the sky troubled with the dark thick clouds on the verge of raining mixed up with the sounds of rain and thunder and flash. Really wonderful

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 May 2020

A well composed heavenly haiku.....10++

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Thank you very much dear Bernard. Celestial scenes are a matter of rejoice

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