Haiku - 335 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 335

Rating: 5.0


a tangerine tinge
sun takes a dip in the sea
birds returning home

Friday, March 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 27 March 2019

'a tangerine tinge sun takes a dip in the sea'...Nature has very well taught the birds to know when the sun sets and that they can return home....a nice observation turned into a good poem...10++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 March 2019

I can see the whole beautiful painting, loveliest starting of the eventide birds flying home and stop singing occurring in this same hour worldwide, sending my sincerest compliment to your side Haiku 335 is a most beautiful step into night

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2019

Sun takes life into deep sea. This is very nice and beautifully penned. This is an excellent poem very well penned.10

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Sandra Feldman 22 March 2019

Beautiful scene, Beautifully described, Colors, visions, come alive.

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Pallab Chaudhury 22 March 2019

beautifully crafted one.... thank you for sharing with us... pc

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