Haiku - 38 Moonlight Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 38 Moonlight

Rating: 5.0


under the moonlight
sea is unrest and dancing
nature is quiet

Saturday, March 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 19 May 2016

well, 'dancing' is an interpretation (to be avoided in classical haiku)

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 March 2016

Life and nature! Nice work.

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Loke Kok Yee 26 March 2016

when nature is quiet, it's time to be alert in the dark shadows much danger lurks lovely haiku my friend

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Kelly Kurt 26 March 2016

All seems peaceful under the light of the moon. Beautiful!

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