Haiku - 35 Winter Sun Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 35 Winter Sun

Rating: 5.0


morning winter sun
is a struggling fire ball
against the cold waves

Wednesday, January 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,sun,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 25 January 2016

Morning winter sun waves the rays. Wonderful drafting shared on really.10

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Abhilasha Bhatt 21 January 2016

U r absolutely right....sardiyon ki gunguni si dhoop....nice sharing....thank u :)

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Akhtar Jawad 20 January 2016

Weather plays an important role in our lives, the same sun that was so unpleasant in the summer appears so attractive in the winter. A beautiful poem.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 January 2016

Wonderful haiku material Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kelly Kurt 20 January 2016

A wonderful haiku. The struggle will eventually not be in vain

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