M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 165,800 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Haiku - 35 Winter Sun - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

morning winter sun
is a struggling fire ball
against the cold waves

Topic(s) of this poem: nature, sun, winter

Form: Haiku

Comments about Haiku - 35 Winter Sun by M. Asim Nehal

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/25/2016 1:19:00 PM)

    Morning winter sun waves the rays. Wonderful drafting shared on really.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/21/2016 1:17:00 AM)

    U r absolutely right....sardiyon ki gunguni si dhoop....nice sharing....thank u :) (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (1/20/2016 10:58:00 PM)

    Weather plays an important role in our lives, the same sun that was so unpleasant in the summer appears so attractive in the winter. A beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • (1/20/2016 10:31:00 PM)

    Wonderful haiku material Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (1/20/2016 10:04:00 PM)

    A wonderful haiku. The struggle will eventually not be in vain (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 20, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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