Haiku - 61 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 61

Rating: 5.0


digging hole on pine
with a rat-a-tat-tat sound
little woodpecker

Thursday, June 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature,bird
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 09 June 2016

Oh..its squirrel that hire him to renovate their house Sorry for that sound hahahahaha (joking) wonderful rhythm btw :)

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Nosheen Irfan 11 June 2016

A pleasing sound that the reader can hear.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 June 2016

Listening to the sounds of life. Nice work.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 June 2016

A beautiful observation and nice conversion in a Haiku.

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Kelly Kurt 09 June 2016

I enjoy watching and listening to woodpeckers, and I enjoyed this Haiku

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Randhir Kaur 09 June 2016

Wowww...what a style pattern..I loved it...keep up..

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