Haiku - Autumn Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - Autumn

Rating: 5.0


autumn dances on
everything falls to the ground
and then undresses

Tuesday, February 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 27 February 2019

Autumn is beautifully captured....in this lovely haiku! As autumn blasts sweep, the leaves dance and fall and the trees undress and make themselves bare!

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Unwritten Soul 26 February 2019

Wow....that's accurate, matching with its beauty

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Prabir Gayen 26 February 2019

Beautiful poem....haiku...about Autumn.. thanks

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Darren Jkoeryo 13 July 2020

Season is my favourite. I enjoyed reading

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 February 2019

Autumn touches the bottom of poetic heart

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Mihaela Pirjol 27 February 2019

Wonderfully composed: the juxtaposition from the second to the third line is great! The transition from Autumn to Winter.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 27 February 2019

Autumn- there's beauty in it.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 February 2019

ur still in autumn here its cold winter snow all over many poets who read me r very young 19 plus minus many 43 plus minus I am antique archaic I love to help them some r like kids many like gcs and the best part is they message me and say they love me what more a blessing can there be at age nearing 80 MAN JI

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