autumn dances on
everything falls to the ground
and then undresses
Autumn is beautifully captured....in this lovely haiku! As autumn blasts sweep, the leaves dance and fall and the trees undress and make themselves bare!
Wonderfully composed: the juxtaposition from the second to the third line is great! The transition from Autumn to Winter.
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful poem....haiku...about Autumn.. thanks