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Haiku-Dying In A Can

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Frog hid in a can
Snake had can food delivered
Croaking together
Haiku-Dying In A Can
Monday, January 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
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Akhtar Jawad 31 January 2018
Pain is pain, I couldn't laugh.
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Loke Kok Yee 31 January 2018
If only all those people who throw their rubbish everywhere were to look at it the same way, thank you sir.
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 January 2018
This is sad because any being hurt whether a human or an animal, the pain is the same. A haiku with an important message. Well done Loke.
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Loke Kok Yee 30 January 2018
Thank you Geeta, if only we can see the damage of our irresponsible acts.
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Bharati Nayak 30 January 2018
Wow- - It brings both laughter and tears ! ! A great take on the environmental pollution .We bring irreparable damage to ourselves.It would be difficult to get out of the situation like the snake head struck in the can. We all croaking in pain.
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Loke Kok Yee 30 January 2018
What goes around comes around, one day; nature will pay back! Thanks Bharati.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 January 2018
A beautiful haiku dear post... liked the underlying philosophy. Thanks for sharing..10
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Loke Kok Yee 30 January 2018
Thank you Dr Dillip, so kind of you to comment.
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