Fabrizio Frosini

Gold Star - 171,167 Points (1953 / Tuscany, Italy)

Haiku (From A Season For Everyone - Haiku & Tanka) - Poem by Fabrizio Frosini

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change of season—

also our love is over

entering autumn


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[in 'A Season for Everyone - Haiku & Tanka Poetry']
[also in the Anthology 'When Love is Bitter']

Topic(s) of this poem: autumn, haiku, love

Form: Haiku


Poet's Notes about The Poem

this haiku is in my compilation 'A Season for Everyone - Haiku & Tanka Poetry'.
[also in the Anthology 'When Love is Bitter']

Comments about Haiku (From A Season For Everyone - Haiku & Tanka) by Fabrizio Frosini

  • Navod DilharaNavod Dilhara (2/6/2020 11:05:00 PM)

    Three lines explain a lot.Great haiku. (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (1/11/2020 3:15:00 AM)

    Bitterness somehow make us appreciate sweetness more,
    Seasons may changed, but it never make soil less loyal to stay, to experience
    Feelings may changed, but hearts still have room as it never blocked emotions to stay.
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    Fabrizio FrosiniFabrizio Frosini(1/21/2020 3:46:00 AM)

    right, dear Soul. Yet, this 'traditional' haiku wants to grasp the passage of the season and provide a parallel with human life (an aspect of life, at the very least) . Sadness is present, but it is felt as a component of the cycle of life (centered on the acceptance of transience - impermanence) .

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  • Michael WalkerMichael Walker (4/18/2018 11:08:00 PM)

    It is autumn in New Zealand now, somehow an appropriate time to end a love affair.
    Terrific photo.
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    Fabrizio FrosiniFabrizio Frosini(4/24/2018 2:37:00 AM)

    :)
    yes, the pic is really terrific. I've used it for the ebook - unfortunately I've found an image as good as this one for the paperback cover.
    Thank you

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  • Henry TongHenry Tong (1/30/2018 10:18:00 AM)

    I guess you have developed a good understanding of Japanese poetry, which bases poet's emotions on nature and focus on mono-no-aware, the suppressed melancholy. I like this lucid, concise haiku very much! (Report)Reply

    Fabrizio FrosiniFabrizio Frosini(1/30/2018 10:36:00 AM)

    Thanks, Henry. Indeed I love Japanese traditional haiku (and the best gendai, also)

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  • Minnie Froh (11/15/2017 6:30:00 AM)

    i wanted to give your haiku 10, but it is impossible to vote ( (Report)Reply

    Fabrizio FrosiniFabrizio Frosini(11/24/2017 7:27:00 AM)

    I've chosen a 'no rating' situation, 'cause there are people who like to joke with the 'rating function'. Sorry.

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  • Minnie Froh (11/15/2017 6:28:00 AM)

    really, this is an outstanding haiku (Report)Reply

    Fabrizio FrosiniFabrizio Frosini(11/24/2017 7:25:00 AM)

    you're one of my best readers, dear Minnie! thank you

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  • Artep Ofpoetry (11/9/2017 8:25:00 AM)

    it is sooo .beutifull!
    .
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    Fabrizio FrosiniFabrizio Frosini(11/10/2017 5:16:00 AM)

    ............... thanks!
    :)

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  • Nudershada CabanesNudershada Cabanes (10/27/2017 12:56:00 PM)

    Love also change just like the season. (Report)Reply

    Fabrizio FrosiniFabrizio Frosini(10/27/2017 1:06:00 PM)

    Hi Nudershada! a pleasure to see you.
    in November, your poem will be in the new Anthology ;)

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 27, 2017



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