Fabrizio Frosini

Gold Star - 161,149 Points (1953 / Tuscany, Italy)

You & I - Poem by Fabrizio Frosini

Making the best of what we had
Was our first deal. Pity it was not
Enough. Just a
Pre-destined route.

Our place is now deserted. Wretched
Like an unfinished song. It's the same
For both of us.

Whom do you belong to?
And I? You and I were together
At the beginning, when that
Song began. Will we be
Together at its end?

If not, there will always be
The memory;
Inextinguishable maybe
As long as we're alive —You
And/or I

And nothing else.





(Florence,2014)


Copyright © Fabrizio Frosini - All rights reserved

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

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You can read also my Italian version: Tu & Io



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Comments about You & I by Fabrizio Frosini

  • (8/10/2018 5:27:00 AM)


    congratulations, four of your poems are in the first 12 places of the Top 500 Member Poems)))
    You and I is number 9, Nocturnal is number 1, Tenderness 3 and Beyond 12! beautifull))
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    Fabrizio Frosini (8/10/2018 7:59:00 AM)

    I see you've commented on all those poems of mine :)
    thank you so much!

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  • Ghazaleh Bayat (8/5/2018 6:14:00 AM)


    you and/or I!

    wow! touched my heart. Beautiful!
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    Fabrizio Frosini (8/5/2018 6:33:00 AM)

    Ciao, 'leggiadra Gazzella' - charming Ghazal :)
    Thank you for reading and commenting on my 'You.&.I'
    I've read the seven poems you've posted here till this very moment: as I wrote, I'm on the same ''wavelength'' as Tom - but I already knew that you're a very good poet: a poetess whose poetry honors our anthologies!

  • Mary Skarpathiotaki (8/4/2018 5:11:00 PM)


    Διακρινω μια μελαγχολία σε ένα ουδέτερο πια από συναισθήματα τοπίο. Η ώρα του αποχωρισμού έχει την οδύνη της έλλειψης των έντονων συναισθημάτων αρκετά οδυνηρό κι ας καλύπτεται στην ποίηση σας.Ευχαριστώ. (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (8/5/2018 5:01:00 AM)

    Σας ευχαριστώ για το είδος του σχόλιου για το ποίημά μου, αγαπητέ Μαρία Σκαρπαθιωτάκη
    It's very kind of you reading and commenting on my poem, and I am truly glad that you liked it. Thank you.

  • Ashika Murali Acharya (2/23/2018 7:43:00 PM)


    Beautiful narrative of a complex emotion that blankets us at times. Nicely worded. (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (3/5/2018 10:47:00 AM)

    so nice of you, Ashika. Thank you so much

  • (2/19/2018 3:25:00 PM)


    When you feel intimate romance, however you don't know how to state the enchantment words let verse help! These affection ballads for him and her, are the ideal method to state I adore you. (Report) Reply

    (2/23/2018 5:05:00 AM)

    thank you for visiting and commenting on my poem. Blessings

  • Unwritten Soul (10/17/2017 9:47:00 AM)


    A beautiful arrangement of words from one heart to another...white and clean (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (10/27/2017 12:57:00 PM)

    your kindness is brighter than a star, dear Soul. Thank you

  • (10/11/2017 9:50:00 PM)


    Posted here with changes: https: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/to-fabrizio-frosini-the-neurosurgeon/ (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (10/17/2017 6:03:00 AM)

    I'll see it. Thanks
    Cheers

  • (10/11/2017 8:59:00 PM)


    How strange
    I could cut open a brain
    look into hippocampus
    pituitary, amygdala
    frontal lobe, hypothalamus
    optic and auditory nerves
    name any nook any gyration
    I could dissect all
    but I could not detect
    your lies when you said
    you dearly loved me

    you left me
    without a trace
    my house is deserted now
    where there were roses in vases
    swarms of mosquitoes fly

    we loved Mozart and Ribaldi
    now when I come home
    I see our poodle sniffing
    your slippers, circling the bed
    and wondering why are you not here
    he runs to me and howls

    I loved you dearly, honestly, sincerely
    I do not know where I went wrong
    be happy with your new lover
    forget me, my life will move along
    your memories will remain with me
    forever...
    (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (10/17/2017 6:02:00 AM)

    :)
    thank you, Ravi!

  • Savita Tyagi (9/5/2017 7:11:00 AM)


    Had read this lovely poem quiet some time back. Love really is a complex emotion. Even in separation it is there with many sided memories.like splinters on porcupine's back we carry it all. (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (9/6/2017 5:17:00 AM)

    thank you so much, dear Savita. Blessings

  • Ivan Brooks (9/4/2017 3:08:00 PM)


    Wow, beautiful narrative of the complexity of a love that borders on the verge of uncertainty..especially ''will we be together again''...brilliant, thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (9/5/2017 5:07:00 AM)

    Hi Ivan,
    thank you so much!

  • Bharati Nayak (9/2/2017 7:28:00 PM)


    Whom do you belong to?
    And I? You and I were together
    At the beginning, when that
    Song began. Will we be
    Together at its end?

    If not, there will always be
    The memory;
    Inextinguishable maybe
    As long as we're alive —You
    And/or I

    And nothing else.
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Inextinguishable is the memory of love even in separation.Thank you Fabrizio for this wonderful poem.
    (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (9/4/2017 3:47:00 AM)

    thank you so much, dear Bharati. Looking forward to getting your poem for the 'Bitter Love' compilation [the title of the book will be 'When Love is Bitter']

  • Egwu Collins (6/11/2017 12:29:00 PM)


    wonderful poem it's just real (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (6/14/2017 8:59:00 AM)

    thank you so much, Egwu. Really kind of you

  • Egwu Collins (6/11/2017 12:27:00 PM)


    wonderful poem it just feels real (Report) Reply

  • Rini Shibu (6/1/2017 6:32:00 PM)


    Wonderful piece of love Fab...
    Rini
    (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (6/10/2017 11:52:00 AM)

    thank you so much, Rini!
    BTW: our book for children will be published soon ;)

  • (5/17/2017 12:05:00 PM)


    beautiful and true but sad (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (5/19/2017 4:06:00 AM)

    thank you so much indeed, but why sad? ;)

  • (12/12/2016 10:45:00 AM)


    Whom do you belong to? - And I? You and I were together - when that - Song began
    i love these lines.
    this happens when LOVE is no more what it was, a wonderful song to be sung together by 2 souls
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    Fabrizio Frosini (12/14/2016 3:53:00 AM)

    another kind, lovely comment from you, Mamma Rosa.. I'm really indebted to you! Gracias - mille grazie - thanks..

    Fabrizio Frosini (12/14/2016 3:40:00 AM)

    grazie! thank you so much!

  • (11/10/2016 3:52:00 AM)

    this is poetry at its best
    Inspirational write i love it. so highly emotional! (Report) Reply

    Fabrizio Frosini (11/10/2016 6:11:00 AM)

    really a very kind comment. Thank you so much, Lapo

  • Fabrizio Frosini (9/18/2016 6:14:00 AM)


    I wonder: AM I THE ONLY ONE TO GET SUCH A MSG WHEN TRYING TO REPLY A COMMENT? ? ? ! ! !
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    (11/21/2016 5:21:00 PM)

    no.u're not the only one))

  • Fabrizio Frosini (9/18/2016 6:10:00 AM)


    a text for a song? interesting idea.. :)
    ti ringrazio molto per i tuoi commenti, Eva - thank you so much for your comments!
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  • Eva Beylich (9/12/2016 9:20:00 AM)


    Hello Fabrizio,

    there is a very personal approach for me and this poem You & I. I was able to follow your track. It could be a text for a song. Very nice and well done. I'll give you a 10.
    Keep on writing
    Best wishes
    Eva
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    Fabrizio Frosini (9/18/2016 6:11:00 AM)

    I'm trying again to post my reply..
    - -
    a text for a song? interesting idea.. :)
    ti ringrazio molto per i tuoi commenti, Eva - thank you so much for your comments!
    - -

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 19, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 17, 2015


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