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You & I

Rating: 4.9
Making the best of what we had
Was our first deal. Pity it was not
Enough. Just a
Pre-destined route.

Our place is now deserted. Wretched
Like an unfinished song. It's the same
For both of us.

Whom do you belong to?
And I? You and I were together
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You & I
Friday, December 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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You can read also my Italian version: Tu & Io



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COMMENTS
Hannington Mumo 12 August 2020
This is such a sweetly skill-inundated composition - penned with a confident delicacy of nuance and poetic rhythm doubtless rare these days...I particularly salute the author's multilingual versatility, too. Kudos, 'doctor' versifier!
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Michael Walker 29 September 2019
A brilliant though quite sad love poem. So often this is what happens to love.
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Fabrizio Frosini 05 October 2019
indeed love is a tale of happy and sad moments... isn't it? :) All the best, dear Michael.
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Thabani Khumalo 16 September 2019
I can only make the best of what I have if does not involve one thing - a soul is what I do not have to give. Fabrizio Frosini, keep up your work because you view is poetic therefore, beautiful.
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Fabrizio Frosini 29 September 2019
Hi Thabani. Thank you for visiting and commenting. Gracias!
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A B Faniki 09 August 2019
Nice poem. Elegant and simply with a touch of longing. Thanjs for sharing
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Fabrizio Frosini 29 September 2019
thanks. Blessings
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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2019
o song of togetherness no, no, never can decay the love of you and me without any heavenly bless..........//
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Fabrizio Frosini 16 July 2019
thank you for visiting and commenting
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Luz Hanaii 01 February 2019
Sad when two who loved each other had to end their romance. But the hears remembers, maybe some more than others. Beautiful work!
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Fabrizio Frosini 11 February 2019
thank you, dear Luz, for your kind comment
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Amir Marandi 05 December 2018
Beautiful. Emanating so much feelings and heartaches.
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Fabrizio Frosini 06 December 2018
Thank you. Blessing
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Dave Walker 26 October 2018
Love is stronger than anything, a great write.
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Fabrizio Frosini 31 October 2018
thank you, Dave. Blessings
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Pierre Krusketta 10 August 2018
congratulations, four of your poems are in the first 12 places of the Top 500 Member Poems))) You and I is number 9, Nocturnal is number 1, Tenderness 3 and Beyond 12! beautifull))
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Fabrizio Frosini 10 August 2018
I see you've commented on all those poems of mine :) thank you so much!
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Ghazaleh Bayat 05 August 2018
you and/or I! wow! touched my heart. Beautiful!
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Fabrizio Frosini 05 August 2018
Ciao, 'leggiadra Gazzella' - charming Ghazal :) Thank you for reading and commenting on my 'You.&.I' I've read the seven poems you've posted here till this very moment: as I wrote, I'm on the same ''wavelength'' as Tom - but I already knew that you're a very good poet: a poetess whose poetry honors our anthologies!
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