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Haiku. Life. (5-7-5)

Rating: 5.0

Life, a poising game
Like a wobbly drop of rain
Atop a flat leaf

Tuesday, September 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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Pradip Chattopadhyay 12 September 2014

that's a wonderful haiku Valsa.

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Dinesan Madathil 11 September 2014

The ones participating in the game often winning or losing by turns are all around as the silent spectators of own reflections. A haiku could be so strong and perfectly posing a question to man at large! Wonderful, Valsa madam

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Heather Wilkins 10 September 2014

a well written haiku perfect syllables and form

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Diane Hine 10 September 2014

A perfectly balanced haiku.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 September 2014

Just like the poise of a bird in the air.......Valsa.......a very well thought-out piece......great haiku

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 December 2018

It is a great philosophical write on life in concise through a beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing.10

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Rajkamal P.j 18 November 2014

Really amazing. The so complex life in so simple lines. Brilliant. Congrats for sharing

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Ken E Hall 22 September 2014

A thinkers haiku on life and its meaning how oft it can change its course....perfect...regards

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Geetha Jayakumar 13 September 2014

A Wonderful Haiku on life.......Beautiful lines... Like a wobbly drop of rain....Loved it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 September 2014

Life is a wobbly game. Neatly illustrated in just a few strokes. Thank you.

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