Life, a poising game
Like a wobbly drop of rain
Atop a flat leaf
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that's a wonderful haiku Valsa.
The ones participating in the game often winning or losing by turns are all around as the silent spectators of own reflections. A haiku could be so strong and perfectly posing a question to man at large! Wonderful, Valsa madam
a well written haiku perfect syllables and form
A perfectly balanced haiku.
Just like the poise of a bird in the air.......Valsa.......a very well thought-out piece......great haiku
It is a great philosophical write on life in concise through a beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing.10
Really amazing. The so complex life in so simple lines. Brilliant. Congrats for sharing
A thinkers haiku on life and its meaning how oft it can change its course....perfect...regards
A Wonderful Haiku on life.......Beautiful lines...
Like a wobbly drop of rain....Loved it.
Life is a wobbly game. Neatly illustrated in just a few strokes. Thank you.
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