Valsa George


Haiku. Life. (5-7-5) - Poem by Valsa George

Life, a poising game
Like a wobbly drop of rain
Atop a flat leaf

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Haiku. Life. (5-7-5) by Valsa George

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/6/2018 11:15:00 PM)

    It is a great philosophical write on life in concise through a beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Jez Brul (8/8/2018 9:43:00 AM)

    A vivid picture of a leaf after the rain....so relaxing to the eyes....i love it....to my fav list and 10++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • (11/18/2014 11:14:00 PM)

    Really amazing. The so complex life in so simple lines. Brilliant. Congrats for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • (9/22/2014 6:06:00 AM)

    A thinkers haiku on life and its meaning how oft it can change its course....perfect...regards (Report)Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (9/13/2014 10:59:00 AM)

    A Wonderful Haiku on life.......Beautiful lines...
    Like a wobbly drop of rain....Loved it.
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/12/2014 3:54:00 AM)

    Life is a wobbly game. Neatly illustrated in just a few strokes. Thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/12/2014 2:43:00 AM)

    that's a wonderful haiku Valsa. (Report)Reply

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  • Dinesh Nair (9/11/2014 11:09:00 PM)

    The ones participating in the game often winning or losing by turns are all around as the silent spectators of own reflections. A haiku could be so strong and perfectly posing a question to man at large! Wonderful, Valsa madam (Report)Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins (9/10/2014 9:41:00 PM)

    a well written haiku perfect syllables and form (Report)Reply

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  • Diane Hine (9/10/2014 6:39:00 AM)

    A perfectly balanced haiku. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/10/2014 12:47:00 AM)

    Just like the poise of a bird in the air.......Valsa.......a very well thought-out piece......great haiku (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (9/10/2014 12:15:00 AM)

    That's the essence of all ethics I know. A thoughtful write. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 10, 2014


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