Life, a poising game
Like a wobbly drop of rain
Atop a flat leaf
That's the essence of all ethics I know. A thoughtful write.
The ones participating in the game often winning or losing by turns are all around as the silent spectators of own reflections. A haiku could be so strong and perfectly posing a question to man at large! Wonderful, Valsa madam
It is a great philosophical write on life in concise through a beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing.10
Really amazing. The so complex life in so simple lines. Brilliant. Congrats for sharing
A thinkers haiku on life and its meaning how oft it can change its course....perfect...regards
A Wonderful Haiku on life.......Beautiful lines... Like a wobbly drop of rain....Loved it.
Life is a wobbly game. Neatly illustrated in just a few strokes. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Just like the poise of a bird in the air.......Valsa.......a very well thought-out piece......great haiku