Once motes on the leaf
Now creepy caterpillars
Soon flying colors
.....and next what? The metamorphosis has the phase of a colour that is mere delusion as well. It is a fine haiku with a unique thought though, Valsa madam.
The life cycle of a butterfly is well executed in concise. Thanks for sharing.
Clever change of face in true colours wonderful presentation in three lines thanks and regards
Hello poet Valsa A beautifully written Haiku, I did enjoy, Loyd
A beautiful statement of life's transformation in three lines. What was once a nothing to notice had become something to be adored. Great write.
Wow! the whole life cycle of the creature in three very sharp, precise images. This is an Olympian vision of earthly life which can see past, present, future all in one flash of perception. It's truly remarkable, and it's also humbling to be made aware of our transience as earthly, mortal creatures all.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful three liner, but what next, sitting on the flowers for want of nectar, carrying pollen grains to ovules, fertilization, fruits and seeds, reproduction of so many colorful and fragrant flowers, what a magician nature is!