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Haiku. Metamorphosis (5-7-5)

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Once motes on the leaf
Now creepy caterpillars
Soon flying colors
Wednesday, September 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 September 2019
The life cycle of a butterfly is well executed in concise. Thanks for sharing.
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Ken E Hall 01 May 2015
Clever change of face in true colours wonderful presentation in three lines thanks and regards
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Diane Hine 01 October 2014
Great haiku Valsa...........
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 29 September 2014
Hello poet Valsa A beautifully written Haiku, I did enjoy, Loyd
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Paul Sebastian 29 September 2014
A beautiful statement of life's transformation in three lines. What was once a nothing to notice had become something to be adored. Great write.
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Daniel Brick 28 September 2014
Wow! the whole life cycle of the creature in three very sharp, precise images. This is an Olympian vision of earthly life which can see past, present, future all in one flash of perception. It's truly remarkable, and it's also humbling to be made aware of our transience as earthly, mortal creatures all.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 26 September 2014
Flying colors. Wonderfully beautiful.
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Dinesan Madathil 25 September 2014
.....and next what? The metamorphosis has the phase of a colour that is mere delusion as well. It is a fine haiku with a unique thought though, Valsa madam.
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Akhtar Jawad 25 September 2014
Beautiful three liner, but what next, sitting on the flowers for want of nectar, carrying pollen grains to ovules, fertilization, fruits and seeds, reproduction of so many colorful and fragrant flowers, what a magician nature is!
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