In her life's morgue lie
Dry cadavers of disfigured dreams
Waiting cremation!
Oh! what a haiku....Valsa......In a few words a lot has been said......In fact you are always an inspiration.......
A Wonderful Haiku. Truth, said in a few words.... Loved reading it.
Profound truth dissected to its elements. Beautiful haiku.
A very truthful confession is written here, like or not most of our unending wishes or dreams remaining unfulfilled in our life are left as cadavers only, , , , very true
Beautiful haiku on dream so nicely executed concisely and shared.
Early burial and rituals may resurrect her dreams, one hopes!
Let those dreams have peace In cold arms of earth supreme Away from time's reach. Your haiku inspires.
Let those dreams have peace In cold arms of earth supreme Away from time's reach. Your haiku inspires.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow! I hope this woman gets a chance at reincarnation. She needs another lifespan at least to improve the quality of her life. It's curious westerners think reincarnation is hunky-dory because you get a second chance instead of facing eternal judgment after one and only one lifetime, but easteners see it as a burden of karma, willingly cast off..