Haiku- Moon Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Haiku- Moon



Moon waxes an' wanes
Mad after the earth revolves
Yet sun flooding love!

22 04 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 22 April 2008

We are the objects administered by sun moon earth, bearing the heat, tides and the quake and also the flood of love…. short and meaningful

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Deepti Agarwal 23 April 2008

i really like Haiku's...just coz there is such a beautiful n dignified way to say n express so much in such few words.... this one is very good.... the moon, the earth, the sun... great..

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Lynda Robson 24 April 2008

Good Haiku, I also like Haiku's as they are full of expression in a short form,10 Lynda x

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Mamta Agarwal 03 May 2008

sun flooding love. a beatiful line.

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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008

Perfect count again, for the haiku, construct and the imagery!

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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

Nothing more glorious than that mysterious moon!

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Duh Huh 02 August 2009

beautiful Kesav. I love how so much is said with so few words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

Sweet

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this is fantastic..the chemitry of the relationship between the three..lovely 10

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I agree with the other comments. This is perfect haiku. Love it! Karin Anderson

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