Haiku- Rain Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Haiku- Rain



Sky driving wind mill
Aroused clouds causing lightning
Splashed water droplets!

02 05 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 02 May 2008

Our Rajasthan region needs this rain of yours so badly...could you help us with the winds, clouds and droplets as you have done on PH..? ? totally got drenched..........

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Vidi Writes 04 May 2008

Somewhere i read that - 'A poet is someone who stands outside in the rain hoping to be struck by lightning.' But here, it is the 'reader' in me who is browisng the PH got struck by this Haiku. Good One.

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Sandra Fowler 10 May 2008

What a lovely Haiku! Rain is inspiring to poets in all parts of the world. Warm regards, Sandra

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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008

A nice haiku again... raining haiku too, on your page!

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Emancipation Planz 02 June 2008

Haiku - Evaporated Once rained I change Converted liquid - vapour Tis part of cycle...

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Colleen Courtney 01 May 2014

Creates a great image! Nicely done!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 March 2010

Perfect blend of WTD [wind thunder droplet] …but droplets are too soft to touch least injure it…indeed splendid… 10++ [heartfelt] Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

your haiku speaks in volumes..great work! u amazing!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 31 March 2009

Sky driving wind mill, what a wonderful image, Kesav! It says everything else about rain even without reading next two lines. A quality haiku.....10/10. Regards Naseer

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Vinod Kumar 04 January 2009

It grows as a cascade good Haiku, Thanks.

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