Haiku - Nature Love 1 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - Nature Love 1

Rating: 5.0


a motionless horse
on a colourful canvas
caravan moves on

Thursday, July 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 23 July 2020

nice photographic imagery...........

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 July 2020

This wonderful little poem finds its great movement with the manoeuvre of caravan than the standstill colourful portrait......10/10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 July 2020

A well penned haiku poem. Simply splendid....10+++

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A wonderful imagination in a few lines.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2020

Movement of motionless horse is definitely amazing. Love's movement time to time gives us surprise. This poem tells us many things.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 July 2020

Muse of the art! ! With the beauty of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Michael Jack 23 July 2020

This poem can be interpreted in many ways like horse was the part of caravan and died and caravan left indicating leaving behind dead memories, also, it got immortalized in photo frame and the caravan carried it motionless with it, this is a wonderful haiku/ senryu close to life's journey.100

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