Haiku Twin (Eclipse 8.21.2017) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Haiku Twin (Eclipse 8.21.2017)

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In rare full eclipse
Gentle moon dethrones sun
might submits to meek.

Bystanders greet with
Tears of joy and glee- Nature's
Grand Phenomenon.

Tuesday, August 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 06 October 2017

might submits to meek- I like this word choice, Savita. -Glen

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2017

Interesting Haiku on Eclipse, a natures's grand phenomenon. Loved reading it.

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Akhtar Jawad 31 August 2017

A beautiful haiku on one of the greatest phenomenon of nature.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 31 August 2017

A nice nature poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2017

Nice haiku on nature. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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