Haiku – Your Path Forward Poem by Paul Warren

Haiku – Your Path Forward

Rating: 4.7


Blue sky forever on
Stretching to the horizon
Is your path planned?

© Paul Warren Poetry

Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2015

Stretching horizon speaks about imagery here which gives idea of blue sky forever on the way of mind.'s journey. Nice haiku shared....10

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M Asim Nehal 13 October 2015

Another nice haiku....I liked it.

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Liza Sudina 13 October 2015

smt it seems that everything is already planned by God! or known by Him.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 14 October 2015

Verily, planned actions find the path forward.....10

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Mannah Shekh 13 October 2015

Sweet! Thanks.. :)

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Akhtar Jawad 08 June 2018

a question to be seriously that before it's replied.

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Rajnish Manga 13 July 2017

Though our life may be destined to tale a particular route but with planning and determined action, one can alter the course of things to come. Nice poem. Thanks, Paul.

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Pregnant with positivist and impregnated with introspection is this short but significant submission. Well done Paul!

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Tia Attwood 14 February 2016

excellent little haiku done in a 6'7'4 format. short, sweet and precise. great job. hopefully i am on the right path now in my life. Regards Tia

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B.m. Biswas 27 November 2015

it is beautifully planned haiku...excellent.....

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