Halcyon World Poem by Valerie Dohren

Halcyon World

Rating: 5.0


Come with me, let’s take a ride,
Swiftly, silently to glide
‘Cross the cerulean sky;
Above the earth, flying high.

Through the air, over the land,
Twisting, turning, hand in hand;
Then beyond the em’rald sea,
Floating, drifting, peacefully.

So to ford the bridge of time,
Into places so sublime -
Leaving all that’s done, behind;
See the future - in our mind.

Trav'lling on to worlds unknown,
Every rock and every stone,
Passing there beneath our eyes,
Marks the road to Paradise.

On and on our way to wend,
Every corner, every bend,
Leading us beyond the gloom;
On to where the flowers bloom.

On to where all things are fair,
Wearing garlands in our hair;
Dancing on the crested clouds,
Spread beneath as angels’ shrouds.

There within a halcyon world,
All our dreams to be unfurled -
We shall live as spirits born,
Heralding a golden dawn.

Come with me, let’s take a ride,
Spanning o’er a deep divide;
Such that sets the senses free -
Come, O come, just you and me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 07 August 2013

Another masterpiece Val.

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Lyn Paul 06 August 2013

A fabulous fairy tale of beatiful words - setting all of our senses free. Thank You Val

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Danny Draper 06 August 2013

A trip of high spirits and near gravity free, skirting stars and distant a seas, a fine write and a very noble and gentle and enticing idea.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 05 August 2013

A wonderful and vivid imagination of the Halcyon world with the lovers gliding in is so exhilarating !

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Heather Wilkins 04 August 2013

reading for the second time. yes I will go along for the ride.

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 14 February 2014

Poetic minds think alike Val. Joseph and I are booking our tickets. Lovely form and perfect rhyme as usual.

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Gillian Commerford 16 September 2013

Hi Really liked your poem.I'd like to go to that world.Also thanks for your comments on my poem I although not beautiful.Gillian

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Kelvin Owusu 09 August 2013

this i found to be romantic and fantastical

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Valsa George 08 August 2013

Another trip to realms beautiful, beyond all cares and pestering worries of the world on tireless wings of imagination! ! Enjoy all your rides! ! Perfect rhyme and unobstructed flow! !

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G.R. Gaus 08 August 2013

Nice rhyme scheme, perfect flow, as you take us along into your vivid imagination world, thanks for the ride....

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